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Name:Shonagar/b]
Age:
Gender:male
Sexual Orientation:heterosexual
Craft:beastcraft
Rank:aprentice/candidate
History:i had always loved animals so it was a natural fit when the Master beastcraftsman took me in as a aprentice, when he noticed i was good at healing the animals he took me aside for a talk. Shonagar he said i know you like the dragons right, sience i was old enough to walk i had stared at the dragons flying out of high reaches wheyr on patrol.;
so he was sending me to the wheyr he knew i wasnt a journeyman so truly i couldnt be a dragonhealer but as he said those eggs are on the sand now and will need u if u have the title or no besides the healer there will help u finish your lessons. who knows hey maybe you will get to touch a dragons egg or impress? u r the right age u know. he smiled and walked away as i climed in the wagon for the wheyr.
Appearance: tan, 5'5 short for a man but muscular like a football player from working alot. hair the color of wheat eyes the color of almonds.

Personality:a tad shy but will defend those he loves with a couragous heart. tender and tough. slow to anger but has strong views about certin subjects.
flaw: sometimes has a tendency to focus on animals so much he forgets about the humans who he was supposed to make time for.
flaw: he is very very curious, so much so that he can get into trouble over it.
strength: he is there for u if u need someone to talk to and dont want gossip, #2 he does not lie (but does forget)
Other:memory of names is horrid (If you don't want the OOC responsibility of metal dragons, put "no gold/bronze" here. no bronze/