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 Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:35 pm
I'm writing a story for class and I'm suck. I have "dust as thick as a _____" I have no idea what comes next. Anyone have any ideas?
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:03 pm
underwater ink cloud........ I dunno. orz
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:11 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:39 pm
*originally thought this thread said 'need a smile'.* x3
How about, London Fog?
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Second_Crimson Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:10 pm
Do you have to use a simile? Sometimes if I get stuck on describing something I find it helps to switch HOW I'm going about describing it...such as instead of using a simile or metaphor, simply stating it: "The dust was thick."
Great stories do not need to be overly burdened with similes and metaphors and other literary devices.
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