Critiquing policy: Anything is fine,just keep in mind it's my first poem.
A Change of Heart:
At night I imagine your warm embrace.If a man in love is crazy,then I am a basket case.The scent that you give off,is simply divine.I use my eyes to trace your body,and wish that you were mine.
I approach you with my heart,ignoring my mind.Strucken with your with your beauty,to everything else I am blind.By this time I am thinking once agian.Me and you together is probably a sin.
Words tumble out,of which I have spoken already for the fith time around.I wait in awkward silence as you fail you make a sound.Recognizing the familiar expression etched upon you,my face morphs into a frown.yet quickly turns into a bright smile,when finally you cease to turn me down.
I approach you with my heart,ignoring my mind.Strucken with your with your beauty,to everything else I am blind.By this time I am thinking once agian.Me and you together is probably a sin.
Words tumble out,of which I have spoken already for the fith time around.I wait in awkward silence as you fail you make a sound.Recognizing the familiar expression etched upon you,my face morphs into a frown.yet quickly turns into a bright smile,when finally you cease to turn me down.
