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 Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 12:12 pm
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/What-Are-You-Looking-At-153408289
Trying to work on getting poses and expressions to match up, also working on making my poses more interesting. All HELPFUL feedback welcome! (Try not to just say you like it, mention anything that seems even slightly off. I will look into a fix, even if it was done on purpose.)
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:12 am
I'd just say the pose seems a bit awkward. The legs are facing more to the left, the butt and back are a bit more like a front view/turned the other way, then the upper body is turned to the left like the legs (turning more-so). The butt/back seems like it's working against the rest of the pose, I think. I'd try to have them appear more as the middlegrounds. Her spine seems like it should be very close (or even connected) to the outline of her back, I think.
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 6:53 am
I think I follow. I'll try to tweak it a bit.
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:10 am
I altered the picture, is that what you meant?
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:05 am
The legs seem to be in an awkward angle to me.
While your character's butt is facing the side, the left leg is facing in another direction giving it a flat 2D effect.
Plus the back seems to be twisted in comparison to the rest of the body like Zantetsken said which gives your char. a some-what odd look to it.
Everything else great!
(off-topic)P.s. Your shading is awsome C';
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:09 am
I guess I need a redline, cause I just don't get what you mean about the back I guess.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:30 pm
I don't entirely recall how it looked before, but what I mentioned before doesn't seem to be popping out at me anymore. I'm not sure what to say now, if anything, but your tweaking seems to have worked.
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:52 am
Zantetsken I don't entirely recall how it looked before, but what I mentioned before doesn't seem to be popping out at me anymore. I'm not sure what to say now, if anything, but your tweaking seems to have worked. Her butt and the line in her back was more to the left, and I moved them right a little.
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