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Willow Wolfblade

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:42 pm


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This is a picture I did for my friend Sigmar for Christmas. How did I do? How can I improve?

PS I didn't do the line art, so I only really need critique for the coloring.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:18 pm


Perhaps it's just me, but when I look at the image it looks a bit flat.
The shades you chose for highlights and shadows are a bit subdued.

To emphasize certain shapes and features of the human body, you want harder shadows on places that are 'more covered' than others.

Basically, what I'm getting at is don't be afraid to color the clothes darker because it's natural. It's the same way for highlights. There can be different shades of highlights.

I think (I don't have the picture open as I type this. I looked at it then posted a reply, so I'm going off of what I remember) you have the right idea with your character's skin color. It looks more..'defined' for lack of a better word.

Anyway, I know I probably sound incoherent, so I apologize.

But, in general, the pic's pretty good~<3 just work on those shadows ;D

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:28 am


I agree with broken on the colors thing dont be afraid of the darker colors you'll be surprised as to how much better it could get if you tried darkening some areas
oh and something thats really bothering me is her left boob (our right) it seems saggy? im not sure if thats just me though

anywho I love the colors you chose and the pose
keep working hard for improvement! biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:38 am


On the right (our left) side of her face, the shading is well-done. There is a good amount of depth.

However, I do agree with the others. Use a lot more contrast in your shading. Don't be afraid to experiment on that color wheel. Here, I'll offer you a tip on shading. User Image

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The diagram above was taken from my Photoshop CS2.

See how the arrows point to what would be better for light and dark? It's always best to pick colors yourself (dodge and burn don't work in most cases, dodge is turning a color white and burn is turning a color black). You can even transition to a dark purple in case you want to make some deep shadows. The same goes for a brighter blue to make highlights (if you were shading the color blue).

I hope that helped.
Experiment as much as you can with those colors. I see tons of potential!

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:48 am


Thanks so much you guys =3 This helps and I'll keep these tips in mind. I might go back and fix it some time soon...or if I get lazy, whenever I have nothing to do, lol.
I just need to find myself a good hair tutorial =P.

PS
Love your pic FlipMaester. Especially Issun on your hand XD
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