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Yami_no_Tenshi20

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:02 pm


I just don't know where I went wrong in this life time.
I guess it was just what I thought was right in my mind.
But sadly it only led me to somewhere that I don't think I can get out of.
It saddens me.
Sickens me.

But, yet I'm putting the happy face on for my friends and family.
And for what?
To prolong the inedible?
I guess so...
I just can't seem to move anywhere, and the darkness is starting to seep in.

I can feel my body giving in to it.
Even my heart stopped beating for the fight to survive.
Can I sleep now?
Really?
I'm done?

I'm done.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:38 am


nice work.. like your heart is speaking right off from the page..
wish your next poem would be a happy this time..
dont forget to smile.. ^_^

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:19 am


This has a lot of meaning and I love the rhythm to it.....I don't necessarily like happy poems so this is Incredible biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:47 pm


*Bows* thanks It's been a while sense I have done that kinda thing. Well I guess I can post my fanfics on here now that I know ppl will actually read them ^-^

Yami_no_Tenshi20

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:17 am


Overall, love the poem, but should it really say "prolong the inedible?
Thought it maybe should have been inevitable, but maybe you're talking about luch smile

Seriously though , awesome poem!
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