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WIP sorta. Please Critique and help

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Kymmie-chan

PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:58 pm


Please help meh. >_< The proportioning is really getting on my nerves. I thought the guy's legs were too long and the girl's should be a bit shorter but I was told that the guy's was perfect and the girl's need to be much shorter. Please voice your opinion. Click Link: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/024/5/4/Listen_to_Your_Heart_by_StarGirlKim.png
PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:57 pm


the girls hands can be edited a bit ^_^ its nice but...I think their heads are some what misplaced...I dunno its something about the head. NOT the nose but or the mouth....I dunnoo...

xGumi-Chan

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:44 pm


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First of all, some parts of your character(s) anatomy are a bit askew or should I say disporportionate.
The man's shoulders should be more broad unless you are going for the small wimpy kid/ or lean skinny aproach.
Their faces seem to be a little too big for their bodies.
The mans chest seems to twist in a different direction than where the legs are facing. Also the womans hands are are just a tiny tad smaller than they should be. Please remember, your characters hands should be the same length as thier faces.

Everything else such as the hair and the choice of clothing is good. C':



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PostPosted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:25 pm


The heads seem too tall... You should try to make them around the same length as the upper arm. Look in a mirror, hold your arm up next to your head, and bend your elbow to see that the head shouldn't be longer. You could also make the heads a bit wider to even things out... It's not like it's really wrong to give characters bigger heads than realistically expected. I'd also move the ears closer to the center, though it's not necessarily wrong to have them where they are. The girl's ear seems too high, though. Here's a slightly old tutorial I made explaining head/face stuff: http://cloudflash.net/arttips.php (click the "Next" button on the Flash thing).

The girl's legs seem a bit long. If she was sitting with her knees up to her chest, the knees would reach around where her collar bone is. She also seems to be missing her butt. Or it's like... not connected to her back at all.

The guy doesn't quite look like he's sitting... For the leg to our right, the lower leg seems a bit too long maybe. I'm no expert on poses, so I dunno what else to say about the legs.

Zantetsken

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