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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 9:41 pm

UPDATED: Linearted biggrin Hopefully it looks better. I got this amazing redline on it! x-x <3

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I don't think I'll be painting OVER it anymore since I spent so much time on the lineart-- but I WILL be coloring the lineart itself before painting-- something I've never done before o-o~

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:32 pm

Mainly the only problem I see is that the back is a bit too wide. Judging by the angle, I don't think you'd be able to see that much of her back. The elbow looks like it's a little too sharp, and the eyes looks a bit large, but that's okay, Serena always did have big eyes, didn't she? rofl
The hand looks great, and there's a good flow in the pic.
Keep up the good work.

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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:00 pm

Yup yup! I totally see what'cha mean! Thankfully all of it can easily be corrected. I have such a bad time with anatomy > w < Hopefully I can get better soon~

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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:14 pm

Updated with new <3

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