SaraDiva728
A few grammatical errors here. In line two you meant "worn" instead of "warn," something is askew in the third from the last line and in the last line "whos" needs an "e". You typically don't use commas and such in your work, so I didn't count that. I noticed too that your flow is getting better and better. Overall, this is great work. I love your poetry, and I think that you are very talented, so please keep it coming!
i know about the spelling and grammar errors i just forgot to fix them before posting it
sweatdrop but i don't know, try reading that line again cause i read it out loud and it sounded fine, but maybe its just me. and thank you so much for thinking that, it means a lot to me.
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