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 Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:19 pm
Help with anatomy is appreciated! I know the girl's chest is off...I'll fix it...and the guy needs a lot of help.  
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:38 pm
Well, for the girl I'd raise the left boob, and add more curves to the arms.
As for the guy, I'd make his shoulders a bit wider and angle his hand downward more, cause twisting your wrist that far hurts after a while.
I also think they both have low crotches, but I can't say for sure not seeing the full body.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:41 pm
I could redline if you want to better explain.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:42 pm
Good call, the crotches were bugging me...I can never get the placement right on those.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:48 pm
Thaliat Everwood Good call, the crotches were bugging me...I can never get the placement right on those. They can be pretty hard. I suggest doing a full body reference and making a note of chest-to-crotch distance or something.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:29 pm
As far as crotches go, I think the placement is about one head-length below the bellybutton, and the chest/boobs are about one head-length above the bellybutton. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:50 pm
I'd say they're wearing their pants too high, and the crotches could even be lower (if you want realistic proportions). If the arm is limp and they have their hand in a fist, the crotch would start close to the end of the fist, I think (maybe a bit higher). The arms actually seem kinda long, even if you were going for realistic proportions - it doesn't really match the body (more-so on the guy). On the guy, you could make the arms shorter to match the body more, and maybe make the neck thinner (if you don't want entirely realistic proportions).
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:42 pm
I did a redline for you since I suck at explaining things. I hope it helps!  Though the left arm (our right) seems a lot longer than the other.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 7:19 pm
Thanks, Sacch! That is really helpful.
At least I got her head right, even if the arms and the chest weren't so good.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:07 am
No problem. c: You're really off to a good start. And I'm not sugarcoating either. XD
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:51 pm
Here are my updates...the guy still needs major reworking, I fail at drawing men. The girl is looking better though!  
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