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 Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:39 am
(I Already posted this poem in arenas so please stop by and vote , i just wanted others in this guild to tell me what they think of it )
I go to school a normal kid,well at least thats what people thinks, mommy's little girl they say,oh look at her, shes the A+ student,oh i can always count on her they say,i smile i listen i play along,but inside its Different,its a pain i can't explain,a rip i can't hold.
I sit down in the back,where i hope i won't get picked on by the teacher,but then again why bother i always get picked,i look around i dig inside and what i find is oh so wrong,i say it loud,and i get it wrong,then the laughing starts and the rip begins and i can't hold it in.
I go to lunch,sit with my friends,but are they really friends?,or are they just kids that talk about people and make dumb jokes?,i sit there eating my apple silent until one of my friends talk to me,i nod and agree along,though inside i feel the pain getting worst,it won't stop.
At recess i sit on a bench i put my mp3 on and i block out he crowd,then the person i hate walks up and takes it all away,i stare at her as my heart races,the rip gets bigger,the pain grows,but i do nothing but stare,the kids laugh,people point,then the rip brakes,the pain grows,my heart pumps,and i scream,i scream because of the pain,i scream because of the rip,i scream because i'm tired of the things they do,how the world goes the same speed,the same race,it never ends,the pain never ends,it grows and grows just like the rip inside of me,i swing my fist i keep fighting,i stand strong,i can't let the rip grow,i can't let the pain grow,it must stop,it must end,i fight with my hands until it all ends,the rip stops,the pain stops,and all i hear is my silent breathing.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:42 am
nice poem..
says so much of inner dread and pain..
dont let people's label to you rip you apart..
you are 'you' for a reason..
and you are 'you' specially..
cherish yourself more and live life free from people's expectations..
smile at your own uniqueness and excel beyond yourself.
^_^ wish you more than 5/5 ratings at the arena..
coz you deserve more than ratings.
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 6:23 am
BIG MUCH lol but kinda hw i write i loved it i picture wat u go threw everyday trust me i go threw worse huh bt u writeing it dwn helps and man r u great at it keep writein its great mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:29 am
Thats like the same way with me! smile
Nice poem!
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:23 am
When I read this, I can feel your pain. Sometimes I feel the same way, but thats life. I really like the poem though. GOOD LUCK IN ARENAS wink
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:16 pm
Omg that was like wow, you really good at writing, you should consider writing a story.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 1:28 am
Thank you all very much [:
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