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 Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:49 am
Since I can't get much feedback on my stuff unless I ask, I'm asking.
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Arachne-Color-150358343
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Midgard-Color-149511399
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Sunset-150002325
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Strife-149323293
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Thom-Color-147513856
If anyone give particularly useful feedback there may be a little gold in it for ya!
BTW, "Useful" is defined as: Useful (Us - ful) adj. A comment or form of feedback longer than "Nice" and far more literate than "OMG dat Iz da Sh*tz!"
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:33 am
Sweet Yes, this is supposed to be a joke. At least its longer than Nice
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:33 am
You're very good with colour, Phydey.
And manga style art.
I really love the way you drew the Thom drawing. It's all in proporation, and the clothes actually look like the character is wearing them - I can never get that right!
Am I jealous? Hell yes!
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:10 pm
First off, I love your coloring abilities (Sunset was my favorite) and your drawing style. I can't really say I have any crit to offer except in the clothing lines in the last one...they don't quite fall naturally looking on the shoulder of the back. To my eye the vertical folds in the cloths don't seem right, I think the folds would naturally fall a bit more horizontally. Then again, how often have I really studied the folds of clothing one anyone's back? Maybe the folds are just a little long to be going in that direction...it just feels off a little. But the outfit design over all is really good.
Your anatomy looks solid and I love the designs of the first to characters you drew. Good color schemes too, although the lines one the second one made me dizzy with that blurred/overlay effect you used!
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Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 6:19 pm
Thaliat Everwood First off, I love your coloring abilities (Sunset was my favorite) and your drawing style. I can't really say I have any crit to offer except in the clothing lines in the last one...they don't quite fall naturally looking on the shoulder of the back. To my eye the vertical folds in the cloths don't seem right, I think the folds would naturally fall a bit more horizontally. Then again, how often have I really studied the folds of clothing one anyone's back? Maybe the folds are just a little long to be going in that direction...it just feels off a little. But the outfit design over all is really good. Your anatomy looks solid and I love the designs of the first to characters you drew. Good color schemes too, although the lines one the second one made me dizzy with that blurred/overlay effect you used! The blur there was a bit of an accident. I used a blender I haden't used before on the BG, but it grabbed the edge of the body too, and I had saved everything before I noticed. And the vertical folds on Thom are caused because his shoulders are pulled back, which almost always causes that type of wrinkle. (I refed from a guy standing in front of me with his arms like that.
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Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 8:09 pm
Ah, that's good then. Sometimes folds on people's cloths just look odd to me, even on real people...but that because I'm weird and start wondering what deformities they hide under their clothes and then everything seems off to me, my mind escapes like that a lot! xd
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