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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:32 am



Higure let out a long sigh as he saw the tail closing in. On anyone else it may have been a good attack, but on someone like him, with years of shunpo experience, it was like trying to catch a fly with a slotted spoon.
He vanished, reappearing a few yards to the left of Ivan's position, a semi-bored look on his face.
"So far, little arrancar, you have given me no cause to fight you with any semblance of seriousness. Show me that I should take you seriously, or my next attack will end this fight."


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:22 am


Ivan's face was partially turned away from Higure, though he kept glancing every so often, making sure he wasn't up to anything. He then finally acted, bringing up one of his limbs to swat at the shinigami, the speed of the attack shouldn't be possible for someone his size. If the attack hit, the next thing Higure would face is a large White Cero blasting from his mouth, shooting forth in a large, powerful wave.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:51 am


((Alright.. I feel like there really isn't a point in continuing this fight.
It's not that I'm disappointed or anything, I've just already made my decision as far as your espada seat is concerned.
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Now, I know that you had your heart set on 1st, but you need to remember that the 1st espada is crazy powerful, WAY more powerful than any captain. At your current level of role-playing, I just don't feel comfortable handing you that much power right off the get-go. Don't get me wrong, you're not that bad, but your posts are barely more than one-liners, and you are lacking a lot of detail.
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Look at Au3's posts in that fight. Now, she is only the 4th espada, good enough to rise above that position, but I'm just giving you a couple examples of the kind of role-playing I'm looking for.
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Study ALL of the posts in the above fight. Those people are some of the best role-players I know. If you want to try for the 1st espada spot again in a couple weeks, and as long as there isn't another espada directly above you (in which case you will have to challenge them), I'll give you another chance. I know that you are a capable of role-playing better than you have been, and I just feel like you aren't giving it your all, and are not ready for the 1st spot.
Sorry for cutting the fight off so quickly.))
PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:58 am


(See the problem with that is I didn't have the time to devote to the posts, hence their shortness. Also, I wasn't quite feeling the character I created, and if I don't feel the character, my posts are crappy. On the other hand, with some of the shinigami and Espada I created (The one I was using in my RP sample being one of them) I get more in depth, usually talking about what they're feeling during the fight and I use more description.

So if it weren't for the fact I had to make an all new character, this would have been a much better fight.)

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:09 am


((If you aren't feeling the character, you should have let me know and made one that you would be able to feel a bit more, rather than trying to push a character that just wasn't something you were in to.
Also, don't try and reverse this onto me. I already told you that I know you are better than you have been role-playing.
So. If you would like to give it another try.. make a NEW character that you can feel, take as much time as you'd like, we aren't opening the guild for at least another week or so. Once you are comfortable with that character, we'll give it a go. k?))
PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:11 am


(Okay then, round two on creating charry.) xd

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:19 am


((Okey. ^_^
Give it a bit of time this go-round, try and figure out what exactly you want him(her?) to be like, really get the feel for the character. 3nodding ))
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