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CRITIQUES PLEASE~! ^^ Chibi drawings for my computer project

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shirokuxiii

PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:50 pm


These are some of the raws i used for my computer project in flash animation. Theyre all made in SAI.. T^T.. i got minus when i submitted this one.. (well, time limit is 30 seconds and in 360 frames.. I exceeded and created a 58 second flash file with almost 800 frames.. *sighs...)
CAUTION: THESE ARE RUSHED 0-0

raw file 1
this one's the guy in my flash project. Its in chibi, and I think he's really cute in here, LOL~!

raw file 2
the lineart for the girl.

raw file 3
this is the colored version of the lineart.. Sorry, I suck at coloring. o-o.

Critiques please~!
Thanks~!
PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:07 am


Well, the first one just looks pretty messy overall, but you said it was rushed. It's okay for something that's rushed, but there are certainly problems, which I won't get into unless you want me to.
The second one looks really good (assuming those aren't her arms, but just parts of the scarf). Well, the one to our right looks like it could be an arm. It lacks a shoulder to our left (and to our right if that thing is just her scarf).
The colouring on the scarf in the third one looks good, but I don't think the hair colouring looks good. There are some good points to it, but the bad points cancel it out. I think it would have looked better if you didn't add those extra lines all over.

Zantetsken

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