here's one of my pictures. it's avi art for how my avatar used to look with my fiances avatar. sorry for the size, photobucket went funky on me... if anyone has advice then please share, i'd love to know.
Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:16 pm
Well, it would be nice if you could get it bigger somehow since it's hard to see the details like this. The male's neck seems too long, and maybe his head is too big compared to the female's head. The proportions otherwise seem good overall, but the forearms look short. I think their shown length would make sense if they were on the angle the should be on, but the angle isn't shown very well, I think, so it kinda just looks like the forearms are almost completely sideways instead of wrapped around the bodies and that they're just short.
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:39 am
i knew i was getting something wrong... thanks for pointing it out. i'll have to try that when i get the free time to draw (is a mother so doesn't get much time to draw)
Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:44 am
Nice work! It's hard to draw couples and I think you made this pose great. ^w^ Like there has been said, the males neck is bit too long, but allso seems that their hands are bit too small. I can't say it for sure, it's really small pic. sweatdrop Allso the clothes need folds, but I think this is really great pic and those are just small things what I have said. Their anatomy seems to be pretty good. Keep drawing. 4laugh