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 Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:36 pm
8 Bars. Pick who goes first. No biting feeding or re-cycling.
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:25 pm
Might as well be me I suppose.
We allready chewed eachother out like a couple of lesbians. lmfao.
You go 1st. Get me. Ima go to sleep.
When i get back on- if you aint posted yet. Ill post 1st.
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:13 am
Don Blox couldn't have a long c**k stretchin' a rooster...
You's a kid with a bib throwin' alphabet soup from a booster...
Spit the sickest heiroglyphics that turn bitches stiffer than stone...
Like Madusa saduced ya and rocked ya while givin' ya dome...
You spittin' properly is like Heath Ledger winnin' an Oscar b...
That's a joke in itself, ya drool jabs ain't enough for boxin' me...
You rappin' is more mochery than mocking birds ******** honestly polish flows, you polish toes with ya cousins...
I'm such a giant even my mini-me is bigger than you...
So quit bein' defiant it's obvious that I'm iller than you...
My evil consumes any credentials you've created with a pencil...
Cause you couldn't leave a "trace of evil" tracin' demonic stencils...
So I'ma ******** ya verses structure till it ruptures and collapses...
And I'm corrupted cause I'ma ******** it till you feel it in ya a** b***h...
Till you s**t what I'm writin', duckin' everytime you hear someone typin'...
Frightened by lightning that'll strike twice in the same spot when fighting...
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:40 am
So Im staring at this obese Hungarian who’s preparing his barren a** for a tearing
From Blox the barbarian who loves comparing foes to ferries n men who fear embarrassment.
I am sharing then, it’s a sin for Shin- Maikaru to lie to you n try to shy through like a typhoon
Mind you, the only sliding hell do, is inside a man’s moon with a KY tube.
K. Why assume or speculate there’s even a debate to whether or not you’re a fraudulent n fake?
I model n make in a prosperous way, like Shin cleaning his plate, he fat den a b***h so we in for a wait.
In a fort night stay, I devour this lard-o with a tower of power that starts showers
So sour, you’d think Willy Wonka borrowed my marrow to dower this coward.
He’s a flower, a pansy if you must. Rust on his nuts. Trust he gets no play, no luck
Unless he’s ducked over, chin to his Shin while getting ******** in his butt.
I’ve said enough, about his sexuality. He prolly mad at me, and try to retort crapp-i-ly
Or make a pass at me? While I drastically spit the flow masterfully n turn him passively.
On task you see, you meant to block Blox’s offense and hope that he softens. I confess
It makes sense, cept you’re too dense, and fat, hence why when you ran you dint make the fence.
So amend, and bow to the Master Don. Blox, a real life mastodon. A sword was swung to deport you gone.
The pawn’s life didn’t last too long. Ur rhymes aint s**t, son, even if it were dung flung into a porter john.
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:41 am
i gotta admit your 1st line had me dying. that s**t was funny as ******** man.
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 11:39 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:57 pm
Now we wait for 2 weeks for 1 vote. :/
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:20 pm
I really hate that s**t... I wish it was like back in the very first battle dome, where a mo ******** battled and only had enough time to take a piss before three votes had been casted.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:01 am
This is kinda hard to judge. Shin's flowed really well but the punches didn't really wow me too much. Don's punches were cool but his best ones focused abit too much on bum sex, there wasn't too much variety and when you stopped talking about it the lines felt more like fillers than direct hits, but I did like the last line. I think you focus more on the punches rather than the internal rhymes you'll be better.
I think Shin just edges it because of the greater diversity in his punchlines and a higher level of general consistency, while Don had some good punches, some that didn't come off too well with me and some filler.
Vote: Shin...Tried to go in depth so you see what I mean.
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 10:38 pm
thats whats up.
im chopped as a b***h. so i had to reread that like 3 times. but it makes sense tho.
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:07 pm
Vote: Shin. For the same reason as Lucky.
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