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 Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 5:24 pm
HAVE AT!
Just please remember to be polite, respectful, and honest. Put downs and harsh words are not welcomed here. Please maintain an upbeat, positive and friendly attitude.
Thanks....
(( If it seems like i'm being a bit to strict on comments it is only because when I last posted my story on an internet share forum some people that commented were very rude and made me feel very bad about myself and my writing abilty. Only after much coaxing from Silriel have I agreed to give it one more shot.))
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:39 pm
So far so good, I'm looking forward to what this will turn into.
And as I read it, I'll get a better Idea of what to suggest for a tittle.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 12:09 pm
*grins like a maniac* YAY!!!! Thank you!!!
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Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:23 am
I really like the imagry you've written in. I could see her hair shimmering, and the door hanging from its hinges.
Being able to leave the story up to the reader's imagination is a good trait in a writer.
Keep it up. ^_^
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Posted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 6:57 am
you're story suddenly made me want to go thourhg my notebooks and look for the first story I tried to write (well, it's still unfinished).
I have a thing for first stories - i think they are purely from the imagination (most of the time anyway)... looking forward to reading the rest...
I'd help with the editing if you want... although, when I'm editing, it's not only the spelling but also the grammar I chew on...
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 5:28 pm
Thanks you guys for your kind comments, please forgive me for not adding on. It's simply a matter of me getting off my lazy butt and doind it stressed . Liway, I'm a bit short in the cash department but if you don't mind that I would really appreciate the editing work. Heavens knows I need it. Either that or a really good spell check xd
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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 7:28 am
no need for cash... think of it as a favour, if you want.
it'd be fun to scrutinize yoru work... one thing though, are you writing in US english or UK english?
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:59 pm
UK english???? whats that????
US english.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 2:03 pm
United Kingdom, ie Great Britain, England etc...
*grins*
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 3:27 pm
ohh I see... I added more BTW guys.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:13 pm
Jedi Master 1 UK english???? whats that???? US english. The difference with UK and US english is not much, but when you're doing editing using word, it cna be quite annoying because it will keep hi-light words you would otherwise have spelled correctly. e.g. UK US colour color honour honor it's mostly those spelling - hence I wanted to know...
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 7:35 pm
I added more, what do you think ?
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Posted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:05 am
Wow!
I went to check what you've added and it's a lot!
Very good.
Just perused over it... can see a couple of typos... if you want, I can edit those straight out when I read them... or you can go through them yourself.
as for in depth comment... you'll have to wait a bit....
I'm just on my way out to a rpg with some friends... and tomorrow willl be a day for group work!
sweatdrop
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