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elfgurl1234

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:31 am


Welcome to the quest thread! ^_^

Read down below to see the concept for the Raevan. =)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:32 am


.:The Essence:.



Solid Black Energy
At first glance it appears to be nothing more than a sharp black crystal, but upon closer inspection one can see that it's pulsing. Would you believe me if I told you that it was actually pure energy? "Nonesense!" you might say, for energy is neither solid nor black. Yet, here it is before us in this vial, crystallized and pulsing continuously as it oscillates between absorbing and giving off energy. Place it near a flame or light and one can clearly see the effect as it dwindles and grows in power. Probably wouldn't be very wise to touch this thing...

elfgurl1234

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elfgurl1234

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:34 am


.:The Soul:.


-The Fire Dragon
santharia.com
The Fire Dragon gets its name from the hues from its scales, which are varying shades of red, as well as through its gratuitous use of fire. Fire Dragons can most commonly be found in volcano's near the lava. Their flames are well feared for often has a village fallen prey to the scorching flames of an angry Fire Dragon. The beast also has an incredible sense of smell, which can readily identify many different creatures. They are very aggressive, territorial, and dangerous, making them creatures often best left alone.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:36 am


. razz rofile:.


Name: Ryuuko (竜子)
Meaning: Dragon child
Gender: Female
Soul: Fire Dragon
Fel Essence: Solid Black Energy
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Likes: Fire, heat, darkness, fighting, games, challenges
Dislikes: Ice, cold, books, boredom, annoying people, stupid people, anything/anyone infringing on what she perceives to be "her" territory.
Abilities:
Active:
-Fire Generation: Ryuuko can generate fire at will if she so wishes, or if her temper simply flares too high. Unfortunately, however, she has no control over the flames that she creates and can only extinguish them by either "eating" them or via normal extinguishing means.

Passive:
-Dragon Skin: This Raevan is basically immune to the effects of normal flames. It takes very extreme temperatures to burn her, the likes of which wouldn't be found in a normal fire.
-Pulsing Touch: When one makes contact with Ryuuko, they experience a light, odd pulsing sensation. The pulsing may be stronger or weaker depending on her physical and emotional state at the time, but prolonged contact tends to leave the other feeling a bit disoriented.

Note: Active abilities will not be enabled directly from the start, but more abilities may possibly develop with time and growth.

Food Source: She feeds off of energy from most any source. Heat, electricity, kinetic, etc. Since her soul is that of a fire dragon however, her preferred energy type is heat.
Personality: Very temperamental and strong-willed, Ryuuko can be a bit rough to handle sometimes. If she is displeased with a certain person, place, thing, or situation, you'll be sure to know about it. She enjoys being in the presence of others, but at the same time she's not very fond of overly crowded places. She's also not the most social of creatures, for she has a difficult time making conversation and often times merely hangs back and watches. Still, she'll occasionally put some effort into striking a conversation, determined not to be beaten even by her own social inadequacies.

elfgurl1234

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elfgurl1234

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:41 am


.:The Guardian:.



NAME : Kuna Revla
GENDER : Female
AGE : 22
OCCUPATION : Tattoo Artist
RACE : Human
LIKES : Plant life, reptiles, reading, sweets, art, drawing, and music
DISLIKES : drama, bugs, snow, defiance
LOOKS : Shoulder-length deep-green angled hair, ivory skin, and amber eyes. Her favorite outfit for going out and about is usually a brown vest-top, a short tan skirt adorned with a leather belt, light brown leggings that go down to just below the knee, and black leather sandals along with a black-string necklace with a flat wooden pendant on it. For just normal wear though she is more than comfortable in just a simple shirt and pair of jeans.
PERSONALITY : For the most part, Kuna is a very laid-back sort of person with a somewhat mysterious aura about her. While she is friendly and enjoys meeting new people, Kuna is more the type who hangs back in a conversation and listens, taking everything in. Occasionally, if the mood strikes her, she can also be a bit of a tease.
HISTORY : Kuna has lived a pretty easy and normal life growing up in Durem with her family. After high school she moved out on her own and a few years later her younger sister Keela had a major fall-out with their parents and asked to move in with her. So now the two sisters live in an old apartment building in Durem (along with her pet king snake, Hebi) while Kuna works full-time at a local tattoo parlor.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:28 am


Open for crits! ^_^ Let me know what ya'll think, ok? =)

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