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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 3:51 am
♥ Being the most popular of creative writing, I bring you the Poetry corner. So everyone pull up a pillow or stool and bring out your bongos and symbols for some hip verse!
And please, to all those who are born critics, don't flame, and be as constructive with your comments as possible.
Now commence with the rhythm! xd ♥
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:55 am
Miss Freaky Rose ♥ Being the most popular of creative writing, I bring you the Poetry corner. So everyone pull up a pillow or stool and bring out your bongos and symbols for some hip verse!
And please, to all those who are born critics, don't flame, and be as constructive with your comments as possible.
Now commence with the rhythm! xd ♥ *watches* biggrin
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:41 am
♥ This poem is the first one I ever wrote. ♥ Summer Night
Blinding is the light
On a lonely summer night
When the moon is mid-air
And the sun a-glare
Ready to go down
To it's place underground
Safe and sound
To come around
When the night is through
It'll be coming back to you
On a hot summer day
You'll be running away
To a nice cool place
To put water on your face
And you wonder why
The sun is not in the sky
All hot and bright
Through the long and lonely
Summer night
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:23 am
Pretty nice Rose. Mine are often a tad darker, just depends on where the inspiration comes from. Here is one I've memorized and was either the first or second I wrote... I think it was the second, anyway... It has a kind of lullaby rhythm to it and has calmed a few kids down when I sang it to them... One little kid was crying and I sang it to him. The mom was kinda surprised he calmed down and a moment after I stopped singing he started crying again. After I sang it the 3rd time in a row he stopped. The mom thanked me and I just smiled and said your welcome, but I really need to make one with more suitable lyrics for that purpose. As it was one of my first it doesn't flow exceedingly well.
Promise
Come let's make a promise, make it true.
This world's been torn to shreds, let's make it anew.
Countless families cry out for aid,
Only to listen as their voices start to fade.
Treasured traditions fall and lie forgotten,
As this society continues to rotten.
A change must be made,
So let's start a deafening raid.
With weapons that shine unto the tranquil moon,
and a war that assembles to an echoing tune.
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Aesthir the Winged Vice Captain
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:19 am
I actually made a lullaby one time...everyone that has heard it tells me that it has to be an older celtic song....but, no, I wrote it! lol OH and it is kinda dark. Chrisitan's Lullaby
[verse 1]
Endless time with endless ware
is merry measure beaten.
Over hill and over dale
the whole land is weakened.
[chorus]
Alas, oh fairie land.
Where have you gone?
Where do you stand?
Alas, oh fairie land.
You've left us to go
to greener lands.
[verse 2]
Yonder pale window shines.
Mercy grants, but youth denies.
Few truths are told, so few will try.
Saints willl trust, and thieves will lie.
[verse 3]
The young grow old, the old grow wise.
With wisdom comes both joy and strife.
Mothers bare their wombs and cry
"My child shall live, as I shall die."
[chorus]
Alas, oh fairie land.
Where have you gone?
Where do you stand?
Alas, oh fairie land.
You've left us to go
to greener lands.
[bridge]
Endless time with endless ware
is merry measure beaten.
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:21 am
♥ All of my work is published. At least all that I have been posting is. I hope to one day have a book and cd filled with my work. ♥
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Aesthir the Winged Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:49 am
Sounds good, I imagined celtic music going along with it as I read it. ^_^ ...and yea it fit well.
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:48 am
Thank you Aes...
This next poem was wrote after the first fight me and my now ex-boyfriend had. But it truly hits hard now that he stole my world out from under me. Lover's Broken Verse
In my heart and in my mind;
I see the place, I see the time.
But what's not there is somewhere else,
far across the emptiness.
Within my dreams I feel a void
and there my fears and sorrows grow,
bursting through subconscious mind
to tear apart my heart and soul.
Blood runs hot and breath comes short
with him in sight or mind.
But hearing tales of wondering hearts
turns blood to ice and breath to cries.
Painfully, my thoughts turn black,
and dreamers seem apart.
But when my light comes shining back
it soothes a breaking heart.
I wish upon a shooting star
to find my faith and trusting heart,
to never let words tear apart
the dream in lovers flowing art.
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Xisa the Fairy Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:06 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:49 pm
I was trying my hand at creating a poem that when spoken aloud would faintly sound like the wind. Flying From Fathers Furies
Flying from Father's furies
Worrying with the west wind's whirls
Stupidly soaring in a south storm
Father's furious southern winds
Sweeping me from my home
Falling from the silent storm
Wondering if the winds will swirl
Waiting and wishing and stupidly hoping
From the skies will come not a whirl
Swooping and sweeping through long wind tunnels
Whisking me up once more
Sailing and soaring again in the sky
Wishing to fly no more
Flying from Father's furies
Worrying with the west wind's whirls
Stupidly soaring in a south storm
Father's furious southern winds
Finally bring me home
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:54 pm
Just because... Home Is Where the Heart Is
falling away, into his arms
safe and secure, from sorrow and harm
we fell in love, but now he is gone
I want him back, he is my home
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:49 pm
♥ It seems this thread is already dead as a doornail. crying ♥
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Miss Freaky Rose Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:57 pm
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 9:36 am
I've murdered half the town, left you lovenotes on their headstones...
Its not dead ^-^ its just off to a slow start
...I'll fill the graveyard, until I have you.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 5:47 am
I can make some of these I use to in school when I was a kid
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