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 Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 8:30 pm
Any kind of art, post it here!
Photography
Poetry
Drawings
Paintings
Digital Art
Prose
ect...
Post it ALL
keep it PG-13, save the kiddies eyes!
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 8:53 pm
~Dark Angel~
The angel from my nightmare,
I love you so.
Torment with words,
That come from your soul.
Here I lie,
in this dead like sleep,
Trying to decide,
If I should weep.
~ 1 - 10 - 05 ~
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" Poetry is read and written by those who seek the answer to unexplainable things." - Lacey Lay.
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.+. No more Tears .+.
No more tears today,
I've shed enough on this day.
Perhaps tomarrow there will be more,
But for now,
I'm as dead as a door.
I sake,
And I shiver,
Theres a wind blowing by.
Oh God,
I'm about to fall over,
Don't watch me cry.
I'm as dead as a door,
Laying on the floor.
Don't stop to put me up,
Just walk on over top.
My eyes are red,
Theres no mosture to be shed.
They cry out in pain,
To the tears once held with in.
But now in this moment of dread,
My eyes some how,
Shed again.
~ 1 - 12 - 05 ~ Note: This piece was written durring my math class when I was trying to get my head clear of thoughts. It was about a week or so before the 12th that I learnd that one of my friends was sucidle.
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:00 pm
Kiruno ~Dark Angel~ The angel from my nightmare, I love you so. Torment with words, That come from your soul. Here I lie, in this dead like sleep, Trying to decide, If I should weep. .+. No more Tears .+. No more tears today, I've shed enough on this day. Perhaps tomarrow there will be more, But for now, I'm as dead as a door. I sake, And I shiver, Theres a wind blowing by. Oh God, I'm about to fall over, Don't watch me cry. I'm as dead as a door, Laying on the floor. Don't stop to put me up, Just walk on over top. My eyes are red, Theres no mosture to be shed. They cry out in pain, To the tears once held with in. But now in this moment of dread, My eyes some how, Shed again. Nice... it's sad in a way.. and im sorry to hear about your friend. Is he/she okay now?
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:06 pm
Well, its a long story, but just to put it in short. They only person I ever told was my friend Jessica about my susidal friend, and she and I went to HER consular (becase mines an a**) and I reported it. But, I think shes ok... She really hasn't talked about it lately, like she was. I was just worried that if I did tell anyone that it might prvoke her to actually 'do' something.
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.+. Promises .+.
I never promised you anything,
Except for one thing,
That I would be your friend,
And thats all I was today.
~ Kiruno -san 1- 12-05 ~
( This was what I wrote write after I reported it, because they say to never promise a susidle friend that you will keep it a scret, and I never did, I just promised that I'd be there for her. And thats what I felt that I was doing, I was being her friend and gettting her help. )
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:07 pm
~Dark Angel~
You, the keeper of the night
Make me feel safe in my bed
Never afraid to dream
Fighing away the nightmares
Finishing ever other sentence
Perhaps we are one
Saving me from my fears
Never leaving my side
Dark Angel, Dark Angel
Take me where you will
Shield me from the up coming day
And never stray to far away
I feel your touch, but is it real?
I open my eyes to see you here
Smiling as you touch my skin
You, my one true love, my Dark Angel
~ Shatter ~
I lie here in my shattered self
Where I finally open my eyes to see the truth.
I open my heart and soul
To let you in
I laugh as you touch my skin
And suddenly realize...
You used me
You wanted me for yourself
And nothing else
It breaks me into a thousand peices
And I feel my soul bleed
You look at me as if nothing is wrong
I was foolish to think you would change your ways
I open my heart and soul
To let you in again
You grin as I caress your skin
And suddenly realize...
You used me
You wanted me for yourself
And nothing else
I back away, ashamed
I enter myself and lock the doors
I see the my insides broken on the floor
And watch my soul bleed
I lie here in my shattered self
Where I finally open my eyes to see the truth
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:11 pm
.+. Promises .+.
I never promised you anything,
Except for one thing,
That I would be your friend,
And thats all I was today.
~ Kiruno -san 1- 12-05 ~
( This was what I wrote write after I reported it, because they say to never promise a susidle friend that you will keep it a scret, and I never did, I just promised that I'd be there for her. And thats what I felt that I was doing, I was being her friend and gettting her help. )
I am glad that she is okay. I had never heard that before... about the promise... I had a friend who was having a hard time.. he had told me that he was thinking about hurting himself... I did my best to talk him through it and make him think differently... thankfully He has found a boyfriend that really really loves him. He is so happy now. biggrin I am proud of him.
BTW. I really like that poem its short, sweet and to the point. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:13 pm
.+. Promises .+. I never promised you anything, Except for one thing, That I would be your friend, And thats all I was today. ~ Kiruno -san 1- 12-05 ~ ( This was what I wrote write after I reported it, because they say to never promise a susidle friend that you will keep it a scret, and I never did, I just promised that I'd be there for her. And thats what I felt that I was doing, I was being her friend and gettting her help. ) I am glad that she is okay. I had never heard that before... about the promise... I had a friend who was having a hard time.. he had told me that he was thinking about hurting himself... I did my best to talk him through it and make him think differently... thankfully He has found a boyfriend that really really loves him. He is so happy now. biggrin I am proud of him.
BTW. I really like that poem its short, sweet and to the point. biggrin Thank you.
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:16 pm
OMG you got your thingy! Your, whatever you call it *points at her not so naked chest*
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:21 pm
Seras Akenehi OMG you got your thingy! Your, whatever you call it *points at her not so naked chest* Hehe ^__^ Yes. I did. I am very Asain now. yay. ~~~~~~~~ The hole. I tried to dig a hole, So I could plant a tree, But by the time I was done, The hole was bigger than me. With a shovel in my hand, I tried to jump out, But it was too high, The hole was bigger than me. Some dirt crumpled back down from the top, As my feet landed with ease, My jumping was a failed attempt, The hole was bigger than me. I called out for help, Oh my, Oh no, The hole was bigger than me. Perhaps if I didn’t close you out, You would still be around, And I wouldn’t be doing this by myself, The hole IS bigger than me! Someone come, I pray, I didn’t want to be this low in the ground, The hole is bigger than me. But I hear a foot step, Yes, Even down here, The hole is bigger than me. There’s your face, Looking down the hole, Seeing me, The hole is bigger than me. You help me out, Of the dirt and grim, Oh boy, That hole WAS bigger than me. But now in that hole, Stands a tree, Only because, You came to check up on me. I pushed you away, Kept my soul to myself, But you came back, Just to check up. Now, Thanks to you, I know I’m free, And my true colors shine, Just like yours. ~Kiruno-san~ ~~~~~~~~~~~ Note: I am very proud of this, yet not. I like how the last lines of each veris worked out, yet, I'm not so happy about how it ends.
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:30 pm
Quote: ~~~~~~~~ The hole. I tried to dig a hole, So I could plant a tree, But by the time I was done, The hole was bigger than me. With a shovel in my hand, I tried to jump out, But it was too high, The hole was bigger than me. Some dirt crumpled back down from the top, As my feet landed with ease, My jumping was a failed attempt, The hole was bigger than me. I called out for help, Oh my, Oh no, The hole was bigger than me. Perhaps if I didn’t close you out, You would still be around, And I wouldn’t be doing this by myself, The hole IS bigger than me! Someone come, I pray, I didn’t want to be this low in the ground, The hole is bigger than me. But I hear a foot step, Yes, Even down here, The hole is bigger than me. There’s your face, Looking down the hole, Seeing me, The hole is bigger than me. You help me out, Of the dirt and grim, Oh boy, That hole WAS bigger than me. But now in that hole, Stands a tree, Only because, You came to check up on me. I pushed you away, Kept my soul to myself, But you came back, Just to check up. Now, Thanks to you, I know I’m free, And my true colors shine, Just like yours. ~Kiruno-san~ ~~~~~~~~~~~ Note: I am very proud of this, yet not. I like how the last lines of each veris worked out, yet, I'm not so happy about how it ends.
p.s. Im not a very good critique. razz
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:32 pm
No your right. The rhyme isn't very good, and I know that.
I'm not really one for rhyming in poems, I can't really write a poem that DOES.
Hehe, but my friend Lacey Lay, CAN'T write a poem that doesn't.
^-^ Were like little oppictes of each other.
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 9:36 pm
Kiruno No your right. The rhyme isn't very good, and I know that. I'm not really one for rhyming in poems, I can't really write a poem that DOES. Hehe, but my friend Lacey Lay, CAN'T write a poem that doesn't. ^-^ Were like little oppictes of each other.
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 10:13 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 10:15 pm
This is something I posted in my writers guild... its short but people liked it.
-All-(not so good.... temp name)
See what you cannot,
Hear what makes no noise,
Be that of your dreams,
Live as you were not,
Die with no regrets.
01/13/2005
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