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 Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:54 pm
Erm.. Well, I need to work on it more, because it doesnt sound done to me yet, so if you have any ideas, please tell me!
I could really use them..
Burn the pages in the book of our lives,
So many tragedies,
So many lies.
Everyday a loved one dies,
Lost broken inside.
Why do we choose to suffer alone?
Keep everything hidden inside,
There are some things that we cannot hide.
Now tell me,
When was the last time you cried?
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:23 am
It's brilliant. I love it. ^^
As for the next thing...uh...I'm not quite sure on what you could add to it. If I come up with some ideas I will let you know! ^^
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:17 am
IxI 3mily IxI Erm.. Well, I need to work on it more, because it doesnt sound done to me yet, so if you have any ideas, please tell me! I could really use them.. Burn the pages in the book of our lives, So many tragedies, So many lies. Everyday a loved one dies, Lost broken inside. Why do we chose to suffer alone? Keep everything hidden inside, There are some things that we cannot hide. Now tell me, When was the last time you cried?
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:13 pm
Thank you two, soo much :3
I've been stuck on the next verse for a while now D:
and its starting to bug me that I cant think of anymore lyrics
I needs some ideas D:
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:59 pm
Wow it's beautiful. Keep up the good work. =]
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:54 am
Im soo glad you guys like it :3
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