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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:56 pm


Shin Maikaru
I think both verses could've been structured better, but as far as the top verse, I'ma have to give it to Lucifer. Sorry blox, but yo momma disses aren't exactly ill bro. 1


lucifer/loose the fur/seducing her. trust me i wasnt relying on the the mama joke. it was the rhyme scheme.

every line in my in verse had multiple rhymes, and it fit without being wordy.
devil in a blue dress/devil wears prada/devil went down to georgia all songs referring to lucifer. divine comedy a book written about a poet going through hell and facing the devil. spawn- a devil slayer.

get the ******** outta here. not structured. did you even read it? spit it out loud and tell me it wasn't structured well. I had rhymes rhyming with the ******** lead in to the next line. I know how to link one rhyme/line to the next and make it sound like it fit.

all i do is audio so i know my s**t flowed beautifully, so dont degrade it like it was nothing.
Quote:
Lucifer, craps
seducing her/ loose-the-fur, crabs./ bad,

nada armada
lava, prada

crusade/slay, will
play, skill.

Georgia, fiddle
implore-ya, little belittled/missile

whistle, wake.
pistol, place.

Dante, Comedy
to say, defiantly.


Most of the people here just ******** rhyme at the end of the line
"Don Blox is a b***h and I told him that Ill tear him apart like some legos
And if he continues to ******** with me Ima eat him whole like an eggo."


Or say some dumb a** wordy s**t- trying to make it more complex than it really is. Trust me, homie. You try putting that s**t to a beat. See how far off beat it is. The only line in my entire verse I would have to change to keep it flowing fluently and on beat was the line about the armada.

Honestly, I expected to loose this battle. Lucifer has more popularity in rappers haven than I do. All I do is post in the cypher sticky. (which if you go n look at it, it pretty much violently shits on more than half the people's keystyles in here.)So I expected the battle to be biased.

Lol. You don't think ive heard the legos thing before? I do real cyphers. Not keystyling. Trust me, Its not original.
I guarntee none of the people who have battled Lucifer managed to degrade the devil and make the devil like a p***y so much in only 6 bars. **NO OFFENSE TO LL**

BUT the trick is you have to know what Im talking about to get the punches and you have to actually read it to see a rhyme scheme.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:44 pm


People need to stop actin' like just because somebody doesn't like ya s**t it must mean they don't understand it. I understood ya s**t fine, it still didn't appeal to me, and it wasn't anything amazing.

Also, how am I being "biased"? I don't even ********' know Lucky Lucifer, or half the motha ******** in this guild. I just liked his verse more, simple as that.

Oh, and one last thing, I've done audio too... I still don't see how that fits into your arguement.

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Don Blox
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:49 pm


Shin Maikaru
People need to stop actin' like just because somebody doesn't like ya s**t it must mean they don't understand it. I understood ya s**t fine, it still didn't appeal to me, and it wasn't anything amazing.

Also, how am I being "biased"? I don't even ********' know Lucky Lucifer, or half the motha ******** in this guild. I just liked his verse more, simple as that.

Oh, and one last thing, I've done audio too... I still don't see how that fits into your arguement.


Shin Maikaru
I think both verses could've been structured better,

Shin Maikaru
More foundationally sound. but the rhyme schemes were kinda plain


thats why it fits. You said both of our verses were lacking sound, and unstructured. Im saying read it out loud, and tell me its unstructured.
Flows beautifully. Thats why I mentioned audio. Very relevant to what YOU said.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:04 pm


Funny thing is... I DID read'em out loud. Guess who's sounded better?

And when I said "could have been structured better" I meant by having more power and solidity. All I did was let you two know what I thought of the verses, if you didn't like my opinion and are gonna flip wigs over it like a little kid, then go suck a d**k.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:18 pm


Shin Maikaru
Funny thing is... I DID read'em out loud. Guess who's sounded better?

And when I said "could have been structured better" I meant by having more power and solidity. All I did was let you two know what I thought of the verses, if you didn't like my opinion and are gonna flip wigs over it like a little kid, then go suck a d**k.


:/ dont talk like you're hard, sweet a** dude. lol.
You wouldnt tell me to suck a d**k in real life, so don't say it on here, unless we're battling or dissing eachother. For real fam. You jus look like a fraud for that s**t.

All i was saying to read it out loud. If you did thats all you had to say. You didnt have to make it personal. Nothing I said (besides your quotes) and saying "did you read it outloud" was personally directed towards you.

I was merely defending my rhyme which you said basically sucked.
Respect my opinion too. What goes around comes around.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:28 pm


Is this a joke? I won't even touch on the subject of what I would or wouldn't do to you in person, as anybody that brings that arguement online has already hit a low point. Second, as far as I can see, I've been keepin' my s**t short and to the point, while you went on a rant defending your verse, when I never said it sucked.

Anyways, I'm done discussing this with you, so say what you will. If you want to battle me, we can make it happen, if not, I'll see you around. 1

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:31 pm


That's quite alot of talk, am I supposed to be impressed? Talk is already cheap. Since we're on the internet, it's damn near worthless. What do you want me to say? That i'm a 6'3" 235 pound Hungarian that would knock the ******** out of a punk like you? That I have personal connections wit Tech N9ne? That I'm broke because I had to bail a homie out of jail and I still hustle bricks to pay rent for my moms and pops while tryin' to make music? ********' right I play games, helps pass the time while waitin' on calls and s**t. Did I mention I also work out and run laps around my neighborhood? Yeah I smoke weed, to keep it chill while I reminesce about homies of mine that got stabbed or shot over some stupid s**t, because I ain't tryin' to end up under the dirt. Amidst all this rift-raft the truth is I'd gladly break the neck of your b***h a**, sad thing is we'll never be face to face to prove each other wrong, so what was the point of this whole thing? Oh, that's right, there isn't one.

"Cause you don't know me, and I don't know you...
So don't approach me, I won't approach you...
And don't insult me, I won't insult you...
Cause you don't know what I will or I won't do..."
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:19 pm


Should I lock my doors and windows? Come to Brandon, Florida, it won't bother me any. And your b***h a** would have to shoot or stab me. I ain't got much to lose, I'm not afraid of death, let alone a little scrub that runs his mouth actin' like he's hard, over the internet no less. And if you're usually a cool and humble dude, I would've never guessed it from the ignorance you're portraying right now. I had no intention of argueing with an e-thug, I just came to cast my vote, and look what it's turned into? All because the person I didn't vote for started bitchin'. Quit tryin' to scare me/impress me, like I don't know people that'll run up on a motha ******** with the metal in hand. The only thing you're proving with every reply is how idiotic you are. I really am done wastin' my time on you. Either battle me, come to Florida and get your a** kicked, or shut the ******** up, because I'm done talkin' to you. 1

Shin Maikaru

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Don Blox
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:39 pm


And seriously, it wasn't that you voted against me. It was how you voted.
You did it with disrespect.

I take music to heart, bro. Nothing in life I am more passionate about.
So yea, Ima be defensive about it.

But really look at it. Its a ******** anime site. Why am I gonna care if u voted against me? But i do care if you saying my craft aint up to par.

You get what Im saying? thats why i started tripping. and really I shoulda jus rolled a blunt and let it go. But sometimes bro, s**t aint sweet man. :/

I mean I thought my s**t was slickly put together. And there wasnt much I could diss on since I dont know LL personally enough to make a legit diss. But still I was offended that you said neither of our s**t was structured.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:55 pm


Oh s**t, did you just come at me intelligently and respectfully? Props. I'm the same with my music, hip-hop is my whole life.

It wasn't disrespect, it was constructive criticism. The verses weren't bad, I just really thought they could've been better. Whether you say my s**t is dope or not, I'm gonna strive to become better.

"Convicted of invictus i'm the sickest constricted by time...
Committin' precision incisions when spittin' I'm rippin' ya minds...
You trippin' pitchin' conniptions you wasn't givin' my rhymes...
I'm gifted so bitches pissin' on my parade was writtin' it's fine...
My s**t is devine, there's a halo above my toilet, not liein'...
My lines go twice as hard as ya hardest flow, not tryin'..."

That's more my style and s**t that I like. We all have different tastes though. I'm the same as you, I really don't have a problem with anybody till they start s**t with me. And as far as the whole "Sorry blox, your momma jokes aren't that original" was just truth said in jest, cause I was just ********' with you, yet apparently you took it wrong, so my bad on that.

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Don Blox
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:04 pm


Shin Maikaru
Oh s**t, did you just come at me intelligently and respectfully? Props. I'm the same with my music, hip-hop is my whole life.

It wasn't disrespect, it was constructive criticism. The verses weren't bad, I just really thought they could've been better. Whether you say my s**t is dope or not, I'm gonna strive to become better.

"Convicted of invictus i'm the sickest constricted by time...
Committin' precision incisions when spittin' I'm rippin' ya minds...
You trippin' pitchin' conniptions you wasn't givin' my rhymes...
I'm gifted so bitches pissin' on my parade was writtin' it's fine...
My s**t is devine, there's a halo above my toilet, not liein'...
My lines go twice as hard as ya hardest flow, not tryin'..."

That's more my style and s**t that I like. We all have different tastes though. I'm the same as you, I really don't have a problem with anybody till they start s**t with me. And as far as the whole "Sorry blox, your momma jokes aren't that original" was just truth said in jest, cause I was just ********' with you, yet apparently you took it wrong, so my bad on that.


Right, but Im saying my craft is up to and above par. Check the cypher sticky(i have the last 3 posts), the lil stanza you put right there- is actually damn near replicated to how I rhyme.

Like I said, this lucifer battle was outta boredom and as good as it could get because I dont know anything about him. While I broadcast me and my life out here, he has no pics or anything besides his avi and his alias. I mean... how much n what could i do with such lil info?

And I did take it wrong. :/ I perceive s**t negatively, because beef is no stranger in the industry. But i mean, ******** it. We're good now. Ima roll a blunt and be cool.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:13 pm


But another thing tho- real talk.

Nothing can truely be original anymore. And theres alot of truth in that.
Think about it. Its all been said/done allready.
Now what its all about is taking what was said, and shaping it into your own words, and delivering it differently than anyone else.

Atleast being song oriented anyways.

Don Blox
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