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o Ao MILK?!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:09 am


OPEN FOR CRITIQUING
(however I will be making changes here and there)
PostPosted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:54 pm


I think you did a really good job of taking cocoa and its physical properties and translating them into a character. Milk seems to embody her essence quite well. :3

I only really have one qualm about her though, and it may be due to confusion. Cocoa beans have a fuller shape, and don;t seem like they;d be too slender.

But if you're basing her figure off the tree or its branches, then just ignore that statement.

Carhop Cavalier

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