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PostPosted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:46 pm


This is the first chapter that is all I have to say.

Metalic Future

Hello welcome to Metalic Future this story will introduce my new Sonicverse OC's to you all and at the same time make you smile a little. Anyway I hope that this story is entertaining to you and if you have some constructive critisicm that is fine. Now on with chapter one.
Disclamer: I don't own anything in the Sonicverse Sega does.I do own my OC's.
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Chapter 1: Here's Johny

Wensday 9:20 a.m. outside the recently discovered lab of a Dr.Michal Lance.
Outside the doors of a small lab that could have easilly been mistaken for a tool shed stood a ebony hedgehog with three what you could call streamlined quills, golden ankel/wrist bracelets, crimson eyes, tan muzzle, white tuff of fur on his chest, white gloves, white/red shoes with hover rockets on the bottoms, and red stripes on his arms, legs, and quils. He quickly spoke into a walkie talkie he was carrying.
"Dan this is agent Shadow is there any sign of movement on the inside over."
"No one still in there thought can't tell if it is alive or dead so be cautious Whino." Shadow winced the the black human tech expert of G.U.N (yes a black guy that isn't heavy weapons rare in most forms of media involving soldiers) was one of the few that he didn't punch for using that nickname Rouge spread around for his actions in the past.
"All right I'm going in but stop calling me that or there is a Chaos Spear in your future." Shadow perceded to kick down the door even though he could have easilly used Chaos Control he found this option to be more fun. Inside all he found besides some dusty beakers was a young man in a supended animation chamber simaler to the one Shadow spent 50 years in. The young man was about five foot ten, had short brown hair, a somewhat scrawny build, no facial hair, white skin, was wearing white tennis shoes, a pair of blue jeans, and a white T-shirt.
"Dan it is some kid in suspended animation I'm going to let him out."
"Alright I'll call in a lift back to base." So Shadow then realeased the young man from his capsule ready for anything.
"Whoa talk about a nap hey buddy you got any root beer on you I'm partched."
"No and tell me who you are and why you were in that capsule."
"Ok I'm Johny Lance they call me the Ultimate Human Being my creater gave me his last name and said when I wake up to see if some hedgehog named Shadow was alive then if not do whatever he was supposed to do or if he is alive to stick with him. Kinda wish I didn't have to though the guy is supposed to be about 40 so he'd probally be a boring stick in the mud." Shadow started to get a little red in the face at this statement.
"Well I'm Shadow and you are in no way going to hang around me also you have been in there for about ten years and I'm not a boring stick in the mud!"
"Ok then you are a whiny jerk that better and yes unfortunately I can't ignore a deathbed request so get used to me."
"Oh Dr.Michal was killed sorry about that." Shadow said rubing the back of his neck.
"What? He was 89 years old he died in bed naturally people do that idiot." This of course caused shadow to lose it and knock Johny out cold.
"Alright Dan the subject is still out cold I'm bringing him for pick up over."
"Got it agent Shadow pick up has just arived over and out."
"I try to put the past behind me and it just hits me in the face."
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Unknown region in the Gobi Desert Wendsday 9:30 a.m.
"They will allways defeat me it seems but what if I make it so they never could in the first place. Yes in fact it seems the idiotic egg has even created a means for my victory the time is close indead." a pair of blood red eyes can be seen in the darkness briefly then they are gone withe the sound of jet turbines roaring."
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So it seems Shadow isn't fond of Johny. Next time will see what Shadow does when he isn't on the job and Johny will start dragging Shadow into things like it or not. Also unkown to every one is a newly reborm enemy with the perfect plan. Read&Review.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:13 pm


Here is chapter two of Metalic Future. This chapter more focuses on the daily life of Shadow and the other Sonic Heros being introduced to Johny enjoy.
Disclamer:I do not own Shadow or any other related properties Sega does. I only own Johny. I don't own anything Disney realated either.
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Chapter 2: A Day in the Life of Shadow
Wendsday 10:10 a.m. G.U.N world headquarters located in Wyoming.
Into the office of the G.U.N Commander walked Shadow the Hedgehog and his new hopefuly temporary tagalong Johny Lance. Of all the strange things the 56 year old man had seen nothing compaired to the Ultimate Life-form looking ready to kill everybody and a young man walking in thin air constantly talking. He got over his look of shock made sure is grey commanders uniform and many awards were in order along with his white hair and gloves for as they say first impressions are everything especially if you lead a global army.
"Agent Shadow Is this the being that you found uncouncious earlier today?"
"Uncouncious the jerk knocked me out cold and by the way what the heck is wrong with your eyes?" Johny stated completely forgeting about Shadow decking him for the fact the commander had one blue eye and one yellow eye (that make me lose focus too honestly how often do you see that).
"Nothing and also how are you doing that trick involving the walking in thin air young man?"
"Well before grumpy decked me I was going to tell him about my ability Chaos Warp which lets me defie the laws of nature." the emphesize this Johny was now standing on the celeing. Shadow now at the end of his already short rope decided to speak out.
"Sir I also forgot to mention this moron said he is supposed to hang around me but you better find away for him not to or I will tell every person in G.U.N about how when you were a kid you were afraid of Santa Claus and cried one time when Proffeser Gerald dressed up as him for Christmas." Shadow asuming the dirt he found in old home movies in the ark was enough to bend the commander to his will.
"No in fact now I order you to accomadate this young man and are not to be sent on any missions for at least two months beyond that have fun and do not ever try and blackmail me again or you will see first hand the updates I made to Diablon." Diablon or as Omega called it E-124 the show off for it's design being based of the E-100 series was trouble enough for Shadow in the prototype form Shadow faced during the Black Arms invasion so that shut him up. Plus even though he could most likely win the fight in the end he still would lose his job and any money he had.
"Alright I'll do it but I won't like it."Shadow quikly stormed out with a midair backstroking Johny in tow.
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Eggmans base which is actually just a closed off part of Disney Land Wensday 10:00 a.m. The evil genius wearing a red jaket with golden buckles that almost would make you think there his nipples and with black pants, a red mustache, white gloves, and goggles known as Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnick steped into the room. He quikly sat down at his large mother computer and then was brought breakfest by his robot that is best described as a white ball tath folds out to reveal to re eyes and red gloved hands known as Ergo.
"Doctor tell me again why you chose to make a base hear don't you think it would attract attention ergo revealing you to G.U.N or Sonic."
"Why my dear Ergo it is quite simple since they made that Jonas Brothers thing the only people that come here are to stupid to notice in fact that group could have almost been good for one of my evil schemes." Eggman explained with a face full of bacon (strange how he is actually quite right with that statement).
"Now is the Eggtimer ready?" Eggman stated refering to his new time machine.
"No doctor it isn't ergo it isn't time to move on to phase two."
"Well then hurry it up I have things to do and also make me a sammich!" Eggman started to cackle like a hyenia before choking on some English muffian.
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Meanwhile Shadow had just teleported Johny back to Station Sqaure (no more of the this place at this time stuff for Shadow isn't on the job so there needs to be no formal record of time or place mostly I pulled your leg thinking that would be them hear).
"Hey Shadow why is the G.U.N base in Wyoming?"
"Would you think to look in Wyoming?"
"No."
"Then there is your anwser." Shadow said this as they walked to Rouge Manor a place that could hold two malls (it does in a way) when stoped by the black, gold, and red robotic juggernot Omega.
"Shadow step aside I must eliminate intrudered." He (I guess you could say he) said this while his clawed hands retracted revealing to gattiling guns.
"Omega stop prioratize as a friendly." Shadow found out a while back that Omega would listen to his comandes strangely enought. At the same time Shadow wished he didn't have to tell Omega to not shoot. So the now three enterd mansion whiched had 15 bathrooms, 4 pools, one giant kitchen, 6 treasure rooms, 5 dens with HD TVs and all the latest tech, 10 bedrooms, one libray, and a few other empty rooms that hadn't been made up yet.
"So let me get this straight Shadow you live here." Johny asked wide eyed.
"Yes but it isn't my house it is my friend Rouge she lets me stay here on acount my only other option is an abadoned space station."
"Then why not buy a house you probally get paid pretty well for being a G.U.N agent."
"Well you see there was this thing with these aliens and a city got destroyed in which I may have had involvment and I won't get paid anything close to decent till it is repaired completely." Shadow said running his hands through his quills embaressed. Then out of the blue as if some clever plot point (this is a story your reading) Rought the Bat wearing her Sonic Heros garb (I can't explain it well so just look up Sonic Heros images) with red masscare and what looks like leaves in her white hair walks in.
"Hey Rouge how was your date with Knuckles?" We quikly cut to Knuckles laying on the ground smiling like a goof for reasons I can't tell because of the rating.
"It wasn't a date Shadow I was trying to steal that emerald!" Rouge yelled thinking that no one could tell she was lying.
"You know it is easy to tell..." Shadow quikly covered Johnys mouth for he like living in a mansion I mean who wouldn't and he is probally the only one who could get away with saying what Johny almos said.
"Shadow what is with the human?" Rouge asked quit confused.
"G.U.N told me to take this homeless boy in for awhile you know wierd missions we somethimes get." Shadow found it better to not tell Rouge Johny was a super powerd human similar to Shadow in hopes Rouge won't spend about a week trying to get Johny to help in jewel hystes. Johny unknown to every one else had actually read a file stating Shadow live with Rouge and that she is known to steal jewels before they left he just found annyoing Shadow by playing stupid to be fun but he shut up any ways.
"Well alright then I'll just get someone to give him a room and a shower now Shadow I'm going to bed and you better not bother me." Rouge left to fetch a someone who was on duty to take care of Johny.
"Ok then Shadow I think I will go see one of those pools and we can get to know eachother tommorow." Johny then left a confused Shadow wondering how he knew of the pools. Then deciding to take advantege of his probally last day of freedom Shadow went to go play Halo 3, chase a skirt or two, get drunk, and kick Sonic in the shin as he did most days off. This whole time all Omega was doin was standing there humming (don't know how he can hum) and thinking I hope Shadow has someone for me to shoot tommorow.
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Well next chapter we get to see Johny meet Sonic on his first day haning out with Shadow plus the first fight scene. R&R. Also yes I consider the Jonas Brothers an evil scheme. Also the commander santa claus thing was inspired by a home movie of my grandfather dressing as Santa one year and my sister being scared and crying thought it be a funny bit.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:18 pm


Hello based on the fact you should know the title by now I'm not going to put it in the begining of each chapter. I would like to see more reviews for this story or any in fact but it is fine either way. Also I'm thinking of doing a spin off involving kinda of a talk show involving the Sonic cast and if you want your own OC to be the host send a request or put it in a review and I'll then compare the entries and chose my favorite.
"Hey what's up?"
"Jack?! Why you in my intro?"
"Need a place to lay low for a bit you mind?"
"Oh I remeber you ticked off Batman in your last fiasco alright just do the disclamer."
"Ok disclamer SEGA owns all Sonic realated blah blah blah you heard this already."
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Chapter 3: Time to Rev it Up
It is 8:00am and we currently see Shadow laying down on the coach in one of the manors many dens trying to get over a hang over while Johny is using a computer to catch up on all he missed in the past 10 years. Omega was off to go find random Eggman robots and smash them and Rouge is back to work at G.U.N so Shadow was stuck alone with Johny for aproximately a week.
"Hey Shadow on the computer it says one of the best places for young people to hang out is a mall which in fact has been true for 20 years or more so I don't get why that is big news but any ways I'm going to look up what one is around here." Johny clicks the link to find a map and starts to pace.
"Why are you pacing moron?" Shadow said with a large amount of venom in his voice because he still doesn't want to be stuck with Johny.
"Well you usally have to wait a bit for a map to load... wow it allready up man these new computers are fast lets see the Station Square mall is only a few blocks away lets go it sounds fun." Johny getting excited about the changes to the populace he was going to witness.
"Not on your stupid annyoing life." This of course went into a long complex argument that even involved some pretty harsh words I can't even type. Through some strange turn of events Johny won the argument and they are now in the mall but Johny didn't find what he was expecting. Sure the mall had food, a game store, to many uneeded clothing stores, a chao adoption center, an arcade, and some stores selling random junk like farts in a can like most every other mall the main problem was more the people.
"What the hell happened did everyone become mentaly retarded in just 10 years I mean come on some of these people seem to stupid to function." Johny had been ranting like this for about 20 minutes now and Shadow was hoping he'd pass out of course this was interupted by the apperance of someone Shadow dislikes more than Johny.
"Hey faker I still think it was you that helped that Jack guy pull that stuff on me so fes up you know how long it took to get that paint out of my fur." This was of course coming from a blue hedgehog with a tan muzzle and belly, white gloves, red shoes with gold buckels and a white stripe in the middle, green eyes, and a sliver band with a green gem in the center on his left wrist. He was the Hero of Mobious Sonic the Hedgehog and on this rare occasion he looked quite pissed off.
"No Sonic it wasn't me and can you stop with the faker crap it is childish." Shadow said this without even so much as making eye contact with Sonic.
"And another thing... hey there you look familar. Yes I know you are that Soic guy that saved the planet a bunch of times nice to meet you I'm Johny." Johny had finally stoped ranting and took notice of the new comer (at least to him Sonic is new)
"So faker you a babysiter now I can't belive mister Ultimate Life Form would..." Sonic was cut off by a large explosion and the being that caused this. It was a robotic hedgehog twice the height of Sonic was grey in color had yellow eyes and what appeared to be a rocket launcher on one arm.
"I am Silver Sonic 2 built to eliminate Sonic the Hedgehog prepare to die."
"Well Shadow which one of use you think should take this bucket of bolts on?"
"Let Sonic it is made to fight him."
"That is fine by me this will be over in no time flat." Sonic then used his homing attack to try and charge through the larger counter part only to find he bounce off causing no damage he then had to dodge an almost endless barrage of missle fire from the robot. During this Johny and Shadow are sitting on the side lines drinking Triple Berry Julies's.
"Hey Shadow think we should help?"
"No let's just whatch and enjoy these drinks." So Johny and Shadow went back to being lazy and waited to see what happend. Silver Sonic 2 (or Ss2 as I will call him) had run out of rounds in his gun but instead of going in for melee attacks it just floated there.
"Alright looks like that poor copy can't think time to pull out the big guns." Sonic started then to charge a spindash near a piece of rubble he was to use as a ramp then like a rocket Sonic launched off and only to be seen by Shadow, Johny, and the robot was that it had been combiand with a boost dash. Now once again the robot did nothing as it was almost torn in half by the attack.
"Systems greatly damaged must retreat to Eggmans base in Disney Land." After stating this the robot flew off in retreat.
"Ha it is stupid now I know where Egghead is hey faker how about tommrow you prove usefull and help me crack that egg." Sonic said while doing a little victory dance.
"Sure why not need to get out some pent up frustration anyways."
"Hey Shadow do you think that it was a little to conviniant the robot gave the bases location away? Plus why could no one see this guy is in Disney Land?"
"Look up the words Jonas Brothers and you will get your anwser to the second question as for the first Ivo never had common sense so who cares." So Shadow and Johny left to go find something else to do for the rest of the day.
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Meanwhile Ss2 wasn't heading to Eggmans base and instead to the Gobi desert. He arrived at a secret base and kneeled before a figure cloaked in darkness
"Master the plan seems to have worked they are heading to Eggmans base tommorow."
"Perfect then when they think they have defeated him I will have in fact gained victory."
"But don't you think they will find this as to obvious."
"No my creator was always a fool they won't suspect anything. Now is there anything else?"
"Yes an unknown allay with imense chaos energy readings was in the company of Shadow."
"I see trail them and asses the new player in this game we need to be sure he isn't a threat to the plan."
"Yes mater as you comand." Ss2 left his unseen master to prepare for the next days events.
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So it looks like things are getting serious. Next time the other new addition comes on the scene and the assualt on Eggmans base begins. R&R.
"Plus be sure to look me up in Messing wiht Dimensions 1-4."
"Jack what I tell you about shameless plugs."
"Nothings."
"Well now I'm telling you to not do it again so shut up a little."
PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:20 pm


Hello this is chapter four.
"Hey is it safe for me to leave yet?"
"Let me see well Jack you should be safe by the end of the chapter so just leave them the notice and let the story continue."
"Alright the author of this work would like to warn you that a new character introduced in this chapter has issues with Christianity as part of his characterization if this offends you greatlly then sorry but I'm not changing it and SEGA owns all other Sonic properties except the OC's and plot enjoy."
"Thanks Jack."
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Last Minute Changes
So after the attack from Ss2 Jack and Shadow decided to take a walk through the Station Square state fair only to be greeted by a strange sight. It was what almost appeared to be maroon echidna with bat/dragon like wings, amber eyes, not gloves to show maroon hands lacking the spikes that would classify him as an echidna, wearing a leather jacket, blue jeans, his short dreadlocks smoothly combed with what seemed to be hair gell, and he wore a pair of black boots. Yet beyond his strange apperance was that he was holding a bag and running from what appeared and 40 something year old women and teenage girls holding signs saying god hates fags.
"Hey Johny let's help this guy out."
"Wait you want to help someone isn't that hypocritical for you?"
"Jus shut up before I deck you again." So Shadow did what Shadow does best pulled out a gun appeared in front of the things (he isn't and echidna you'll learn what soon) shot at there feet and used Chaos Control to warp to the Space Colony Ark. We see Shadow, Johny, and the guy they helped all appear in what looked like a den.
"Hey Shadow you think your friend Rouge will be mad you picked up another tagalong?"
"We are not in the manor this is the Space Colony Ark."
"Doesn't look like a abandoned space station to me."
"I've done some renavations I was going to move in next week."
"Ok where is the Kitchen?"
"Down the hall to the second left." Johny then walked off and there new guest decided to speak up.
"Hey thanks man I was really in a tight spot those extrimest dames where quite mad I took that money they were planning to use to bribe local politicions to ban Mobian/Human marriage." He said while looking quite calm base on what happened.
"Ha I knew it well any ways since this is my home tell me who are you."
"Well my name it Eclipse the Demon it is techiniclly Eclipse the Bat but my mom had used a Chaos Emerald to cut a line of crack while pregnet with me and for some reason instead of giving average birth defects found in children of drug addicts it made me look echidnaish and gave me adapt control of arcane chaos powers. Unfortuneatlly the foster home I was later placed in for the obvious reason my mom was a crackhead was next to a church so everyday walking by there for school would get me cursed at and pelted with water ballons because they thought I was and evil demon though I think it was holy water but not being an evil spirit made it not any different. Then they went farther to actual violence but let's just say it didn't end well for them. So I left home at 13 and for the past four years have been undrmining Christan extremist groups, study the myths of the echidna people, and another 45% of my time spent was goofing off. I also now who you are your that Shadow guy who saved the planet about a year ago from those aliens kinda wish you didn't do it so quickly they had a wealth of info on the workings of the chaos emeralds but it couldn't be helped." Of course after Eclipse gave his long winded explanation all Shadow could do was stand there slack jawed in some form of shock and then said something he would thought he'd never say.
"You are probally the first person I didn't hate when first meeting them if you need a place to stay the ark is open to you." In the streets of Station Square we see Sonic coming to a stop and his eye twitching.
"Why does it feel like somewhere Shadow was nice to someone he just met man I got to stop eating 50 chili dogs for lunch."
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Now we cut to what Johny was doing which was of course going to get some food. Upon entering the kitchen that looked like someone stole it from a fancy living magazine he sees a bunch of fancy gourmet options. Of course Johny being a simple fellow instead reaches for a plate of freshly cooked bacon which at the time he should have found as odd but it is bacon so who cares. Well he should have as we see a pure light blue neutral chaos chao chomp down on his arm as in defense of the bacon. Instead of Johny using his brain as he normally does instead he starts to run down the hall screaming like a ninny still holding the bacon.
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After Eclipse finish his introductions he and Shadow see the screaming Johny run in.
"Get this thing off me..." Before any action was taken things get weirder as we see a Rouge chao, a Tails chao, a Shadow chao, and a Sonic chao carrying in some sort of slingshot crossbow hybrid followed by a Knuckels chao carrying possibly the largest chao to live the Big chao which instead of a ball over it's head we see a frog. So this strange gaggle of chao set up the crossshot (somewhat of a pun) then using the Big chao as amunition hit Johny in the stomach which makes him release the bacon the chaos chao lets go and shouts before scarfing down the food.
"Bacon!!"
"Shadow what the heck just happened?" Stated a slightly dazed Johny.
"Oh the one that shouted bacon is 0 I found him and the other six in the Biolizard chamber about a month ago don't know why they were there but no one wanted them so they live up here." This be Shadows explaination while he concentrated on not bursting out laughing.
"Biowhat never mind can we just go to bed and get this filler over with." Of course Johny after breaking the fourth wall as tradition was knocked out cold by an invisble brick.
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Now we transition to Sonic, Shadow, Eclipse, and Johny outside of Disney Land.
"Hey none of us have any money so how do we get in?" Johny of course was a little more in shock at how bad the park now looked.
"No problem just follow me." Sonic led our heros to the front gate but instead of being let in free of charge like most heros and thier entourage would be they got booted back about two yards.
"Well this is great blue boy we can't attack them they're just rent-a-cops." A very ticked Shadow complained.
"Wait guys I can get us in if I just use my abilitys to make us appear as someone else." So seeing no other option they let Eclipse work his magic and when they returned they were showed in like royalty of course this is until they realized the disguses Eclipse chose.
"OMG it is Edward and the Jonas Brothers!!" This was the battle cry of the thousend fantards in the park thus leading to a very entertaining chase of course Shadow thought quickly and made it so the dumb teenys actually tore down Eggmans front door thinking they were inside only to be quickly disinagrated and the now undisgused heros standing farther back enjoying the show.
"Well looks like we'll be killing two birds with one stone today boys lets get that fat b*****d." So after Shadows call to action our heros headed to the epicness awaiting them in the next chapter.
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"Alright bye Jack." There now I can go back to my normal intro outro speech format. Anyways next chapter there will be fights, jokes, and the reason for the title being revelaed. R&R and I will pretend to give you a muffin.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:27 pm


Hello and welcome to chapter five of Metalic Future. This one is big it has the assualt on Eggmans base the revelation of the plot plus things will get complex. Yet instead of talking about it let us begin. "Hey man you said you needed me for later in the chapter." Jack get the hell out you're becoming a spoiler. "Fine jerk"
Disclamer: You read it four times already.
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The Begining of the End (cliche isn't it?)
We see our four heros Sonic, Shadow, Johny, and Eclipse in the main hallway to Eggmans base.
"Hey guys check out this sign let's see it says anyone running at over 15 miles per hour or using Chaos Control will be electrocuted." Johny read to the group. "Yeah right Chaos Control." Unfortunately when Shadow tried to warp them he was shocked (bet you didn't think Eggman made something that worked huh). "Well guys I guess we walk then." Eclipse calmly walked ahead with our heros. After walking awhile it seemed that Sonic started to twitch. "Um Shadow something wrong with that blue guy?" "No Eclipse it is just that he goes into something of a withdrawl when he is forced to walk." "He should see someone about that." "Yeah I threw him in a sack and took him to a doctor once at the request of my friend Amy but he just spindashed the doctor and ran away when I let him out." Shadow and Eclipse continued to talk until they almost reached the end. Then suddenly a large plate of metal was rushing at them from teh celling and due to the fact they would get elecrocuted if they tried to get out they most likely thought they would be crushed. Yet before that the plate seemed to fold in on itself some how and fly back up, right after that Johny kneeled down looking wiped. "I reversed physics on it took alot out of me if there is a fight ahead I won't be in it." Johny explained panting. "Alright then looks like you have some redeming qualities." Hope that he is alright This last part Shadow thought to himself. Finally our heros entered what appeared to be an areana with the face of Dr. Ivo "Eggman" Robotnic appearing on screen. "Hohoho I don't know how you found me but now you will have to face my greatest creations A-bot and Sue get them." At his word two figures appeared one being a robot shaped like a women whos intials we know as A.J. the other being what appeared to be a skinny red haired girl haning to her shoulders, about Johnys assumed age, with blue eyes, and wearing what could be described as a lose fitting red version of the zero suit. "Shadow you might want to whatch out the robot seems weak but the girl she is giving off energy at Johnys levels and could be tough." Eclipse quickly explained. "Well then Sonic we will let you take Ivo the brat while I take the kid and Eclipse takes the robot." without further adue the fight was on. Eclipse quickly ruched the robot going for a punch but warped out of the way when gun apeared from its arms and well the breasts. "Is there something with this guy and ripping off movies? whatever I'll just finish this quick Chaos Hellfire." Eclipse used his signutare move to melt down the robot using a flam with a black tinge. We then cut to Shadows fight but before anything can happen a bright light fills the room. We see Sonics braclet glow and surround our heros in a green force field while the only thing heard is "What my Eggtime is malfuctioning wait no..." Then the light dies down and we see standing next to the girl Sue a hedgehog looking simmilar to Sonic except for white spirals on his quills and red eyes. "Hell my meddlesome copy I'm suprised to see you somehow didn't change with my altercations to history none the matter I will soon destroy you all." This new hedgehog transformed into the terrifying Neo Metal Sonic. "Metal what happened to you and what is going on here." Sonic demanded of his metalic counterpart. "Well you see I found trying to destroy you was pointless so I realized something the reason you are so strong is all because of Ivo so when I learned he was creating a time machine I decided to use it to go back and kill him in the past so that you would be a weakling with a normal life, half your friends wouldn't know you, the echidna would still be on the island and guilible as ever, and finally Shadow would still be asleep and unable to stopme though it seems somehow you four were unaffected." "Honey-hedge can I have some fun with them please." this was the girl strangely still around and hugging on Metal. "Ah before I waste you I would like you to meet Sue Robotnic Ivo's own ultimate life form who he treated like a daughter I met her while testing my new organic form you saw earlier and she decided to side with me but now to finish my explaination you see I don't rule this future yet but I soon will for first I made sure Silver Sonic 2 destroyed Black Doom when he would have came to earth in the new time line this has made him a hero in the publics eyes and in fact I was there with him giving me just as much influence I also couldn't believe you were so foolish to not see my ploy of luring you here as a distraction lastly before I waste sorry Sue baby by the way the reason we are still here is because I took a little trip and picked up those time stones from when we first met now begone." Metal opened his hand to send our heros into a portal most likely never to be seen again then he returned to the organic form. "My dear let us go celebrate our victory." Metal said to Sue with a coy smile. "You know just what to say to a girl."
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"Hey why is that girl dating and most likely getting in bed with Metal Sonic?" Teenage rebellion. "Ah well also I made it so the guys would end up in another dimension like you asked. Also before I go what about the robot?" Robotnic is and old perv it seemed obvious for him to make something like an Angelina Jolie fembot. "I see well see you." Alright now that he is gone I have got a job for you the reader for our heros story won't be in this fiction for now and you have to vote which dimension there adventures to get back will cross over with first. the options are
Digimon Tamers
Super Smash Brothers
Pokemon
Legend of Zelda
I'm planning on using a couple of the others later anyways so just put your vote in a review and see what happens also if you want you can request to beta this as well so as they say R&R.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 12:58 pm


Hello and welcome to chapter six. "Hey Johny did you see the flame for my story?" Yes Jack why do you keep coming here? "I'm more entertaining." Shut up you found the guys yet? "No." Fine this chapter is going to be about Metal Sonic learning our heros aren't dead. "What!? Great now I'm going to be hunted by a crazy robot." He doesn't know about you Jack relax and if you want to be here do disclamers from now on. "Fine he doesn't own blah blah blah and only owns blah blah blah."
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Doing Buisness
We see Neo Metal on a throne speaking to a cloaked figure. "Target one name Johny Lance, powers altercation of the laws of nature, other information is lacking so be wary, threat level: unknown, objective kill. Target two name Eclipse the Demon, powers strong arcane chaos techniques and physical strength, threat level: high, objective capture for study. Target three Shadow the Hedgehog, powers mater of chaos control great phsyical strength past records indicate great endurance and when golden armbands are removed his strength temporairly becomes like an uncontrolde super form, threat level max, objective kill and be sure of it." The figure quickly interupts him. "Hey the deal was I take care of Sonic and you..." "Make sure you get that girl you want now silence. Target four Sonic the Hedgehog, powers being the fastest living orginism on Mobius/Earth great reflexes unpresidented ability to get up after taking damage some chaos power knowledge and a braclet from Light Gaia giving him defenceive boosts, threat level max, objective kill and return with braclet." "Fine I will." Metal opens a portal for the figure to exit throught shortly after Sue Robotnic walks in. "Tell me I get to snap his neck after the job is complete." She asks Metal Sonic in a sweet voice. "Yes my dear you will get to do away with this fool now go freshen up we have a public appearence later." Sue leaves and Ss2 enters. "Report." "Sir we are unable to find the four they are off radar." Metal pounds his fists onto the arms of his throne cause sparks to fly. "What did you say!? It's that damned braclet again first is keeps them alive and then it masks them from me no matter I have someone tracking them down as we speak. I swear I will have its power that braclet could be my downfall. Now go and bring me a bottle of fine wine and some tickets to the broadway shows tonight." Metal's voice gave the third part in a very refined manor (he is strangely a fancy acting person-robot-mobian-thing which is opisite of Sonic's personality). "Yes master." As Ss2 left there was one thought on his mind. I really have to get a butler for the master I'm sick of doing these jobs. "Well then it seems not everything is going to plan no matter it will all work out in the end." We cut out with Metal Sonic's red eyes being the only thing viewable.
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"Wow short chapter." Well it got the point across. "So who did Metal send out, why is there some girl involved, and why do you call him just Metal one minute Metal Sonic the next and Neo Metal after that or whatever order you put them in." Not telling you, you will find out, and I was trying to make a joke out of it. "Ok well R&R for this guy and my storys..." No shameless plugs (I pull out a gravity hammer and the chase is one again).

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