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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:22 pm
Name : Lucy Warren Gender : Female Age : 14 Year : 4th House : Ravenclaw Wand: 10 1/2 inch cherry and dragon heartstring Patronus: White Wolf Ethnicity : White (caucasian) Hair/Eye Color : Really tall with long strawberry blonde hair and blue grey eyes.
Pet : A male siamese cat named Louie. He is somewhat small and enjoys exploring.
Home Life :
Lucy and her family lives in a small apartment in London. Her brother is fully grown, so it is just Lucy and her parents. They were from Ireland and lived there untill John got his letter. (John is 5 years older than Lucy.) Lucy misses Ireland and often goes there for Christmas and for a week or two in the summer.
Mother- Her mother, Amelia Warren, is a muggle born witch and was in Huffelpuff house. She works in a pet shop in Diagon Alley. She gave Lucy her first pet- a ferret named Aaronis, but her brother killed it on accident by practicing transfiguration. (he remains a shoe to this day.)
Father- Her father, Samuale Warren, Is a pure blood who was in Ravenclaw like his daughter. He used to test brooms before they went to stores for sale, but A freak accident put him in St. Mungo's for a year. Now he works in the minestry as part of the Manegment of Historical Magical Artifacts. (I was so tempted to put 'Silly Walks')
Big Brother- Her big brother, John Warren, is out of school and is in auror training. Lucy and her family are very worried for him, but hopeful that he is happy and safe.
Diving deeper: Lucy loves animals and music (she likes muggle music the most, but she keeps that part a secret.) She is a pretty good student, in the A, B and C range, but never below a D. She loves to explore and break the rules (and sometimes, she even thinks it's fun to get caught.) She loves it when people make assumptions about her and then she prooves them wrong. She is friendly, but not too friendly and loves her friends to death. However, she hates her enemies (all Slytherins) and is not afraid to fight back. She wants to work with magical animals when she gets out of school, or become an auror like her brother.
Taking a closer look : Lucy was in her room, doing her potions homework. If you add a lamb's eye to which plant, it will make what reaction to the stomach/blood when ing- "AHHHHHH!" she screamed. People were staring, but she didn't care. She stormed out of the common room trying to get away from the walls closing in on her. She walked quickly to the owlry. 'Maybe I'll get a letter from my brother,' she thought. That alone would cheer her up. When she got to the top of the stairs, the looked for her favorite owl-Tim (she named him herself). A big, brown great horned owl. She grabbed some parchment out of her pocket and wrote to her brother. Dear John, I need someone to talk to. How are you? How's the new house? School has been... alright. I've got three detentions. Don't worry, Dad knows. One for not turning in homework (I swear, our potions teacher is impossible! Sometimes I fantasize about turning him into a blast-ended skrewt and giving him to our care of magical creatures professor) and another for hexing a Slytherin for insulting my best friend Paul. Please write back, and if the minester gives you a hard time, you can always threaten him... (just kidding) Your loving sister, Lucy
She smiled as she walked out of the owlry and watched Tim fly away.
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Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 11:11 pm

You have been Accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
She seems to be on the verge of having a strong personality, but she's not quite there yet. Work a bit on how you express/portray Lucy. Use more creative descriptions and try not to start sentences with the same words. All in all, I'm interested in how she'll develope. Good luck and enjoy the rp!
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