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 Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:36 am
these are poems i made myself. some have passion and love, some are inspired by something like songs, and others are just filled with irony! and trust me. you will know when theres irony, passion/love, or songs. if not then...well too bad!
you can PM me if you want me to immediatly respond to your question. i may not come to this forum often.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:40 am
The Irony of Suffering
a Blindman watches the Sunset...
as a Footlessman walks to the end.
a handless man makes a masterpiece
and a Deafman hears the Whisling Wind.
a Speechless man Speaks his First Words
but a Lunglessman Breathes his Last Breath.
first of my poems. hope you like.
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:21 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:25 pm
Not my style, but it has a sort of rhythm, I guess.
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:32 am
CoyoteStar Not my style, but it has a sort of rhythm, I guess. ok. anyway i think the title really sutes it. "Irony of Suffering" eh?
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:38 pm
i really like it and it is very ironic
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