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Probation A Harvest Moon Fanfic

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twilight guardian alissa

PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:31 pm


This story has been rather popular on fanfiction.net, so I thought I'd post it here as well. Harvest Moon DS Cute. Enjoy!

Probation

He hated her. There was nothing else that he could really say about her. Sure, when he first met her he thought she was cute, even thought she was a challenge when she didn’t quite fall for his charms. But now he knew – she was an ugly, scheming witch. It had been her plan that caused the villagers to catch him. Yes, the farm girl… Claire. He had sent a note to Daryl, a note that read that he was going to steal the most precious thing to him. In a panic, Daryl called Claire over, and she set up the plan. She never seemed to truly want to catch him before. Was she still angry that he stole a few of her strawberries last week? He didn’t steal a lot… in fact the note he had given her told her he wanted to sample her now famous crops. But she had been upset. He soon realized this…

Skye had picked the lock to Daryl’s trap door while he was out for his daily stroll and walked confidently down the stairs. But he stopped dead when he saw Claire. She seemed to be standing in front of a tank of some sort, as if protecting something. This confused him, as Daryl’s research was on a table across from her. He regained his composure and walked over to the papers that Daryl kept inside his many books. She didn’t move, and he could feel a smirk playing on his face.

“My darling Claire, I thought you were going to try and stop me again.”

“I am…” She seemed to get more nervous as he approached, leaving the papers of research behind. Was she hiding Daryl’s real research? Was she worried he’d use his Maiden Beam to immobilize her again, or worried because he was closing the gap between them? That’s when he saw her – a beautiful green haired mermaid! So that’s what Daryl’s most precious item was. To say the least Skye was shocked… To think such as man as Daryl kept such a beautiful creature. Most likely he made her in one of his experiments. How horrible…

“So sorry I have to do this to you, my love, but duty calls. Maiden Beam!” He shot his spell towards Claire and the mermaid. Claire’s arms flew up in defence to shield herself, and to his surprise she lowered her arms after the spell finished. The spell didn’t work! Why?! The mermaid was affected!

“H-How?!” He stuttered. She smirked.

“You’re not the only one with access to magic.” She said confidently. “And you’re exactly where I want you.” He heard the trap door slam closed and a familiar clicking sound indicating that it was locked. Daryl, Marlin and Griffon came down the stairs. There was no way for Skye to escape this time. They took him by the arms, forcing them uncomfortably behind his back.

It seemed the whole valley pitched in to buy the handcuffs, or that’s what Claire told him. Lumina and Romana had even bought a tracking device that they would strap to his leg. The perimeters they would set up would be the only place he could freely walk in. He knew that if he stepped out of line someone would be there to stop him. But why? Why not just send him to jail? He guessed it was partly because the only actual jailhouse was in the city. He would have many chances to escape trying to get him there. But what did they have planned? That is what Skye had been mulling over for the past hour as he sat on the floor of the Inner Inn, watching as all of Forget-Me-Not Valley conversed with each other. He had to admit he felt embarrassed, humiliated and exposed – naked even! Maybe that was a stretch. But he mostly felt betrayed. Of any girl that he met, she had been the only one who hung out with him. She knew his route round the valley. It was his fault, really. He should have known better than to get close to anyone.

He tensed when the group broke up, and an angry Claire came over. “Come on, you’re coming with me.”

“To do what?” Skye demanded angrily.

“Probation. You’ll repay everyone in the valley for things you stole or pay compensation for the grief you gave us all plus the fine of one million gold that Mayor Thomas suggested.” Skye’s jaw dropped.

“Wh-what?! How much would I have to repay in all?!”

“Well, lets see… a thousand to each villager, three thousand to everyone you’ve stolen from plus another two thousand to Vesta and I each time you used your Chick Beam on us.” The smirk that came on her lips seemed evil to Skye. “One million, seventy thousand gold. But we decided to go easy on you.” Skye felt light headed.

“One million seventy…. Thousand…” He repeated weakly. “How am I gunna pay it?”

“Good old fashioned work.”
PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:59 pm


Aww I didn't get reviews on the first chapter. Oh well. I'll post the second chapter. If you haven't noticed, the chapters of Probation are a lot shorter than Digidestined of Despair (if you haven't read it). Please enjoy chapter 2!


Probation Chapter 2

"Wake up, you lazy bum!" Soft hands shook the ex-thief awake, allowing for a pleasant rocking motion in the hammock that he now slept in. He grumbled something intelligible to her before opening his brilliant light-green eyes.

"What time is it?" He murmured groggily as he looked over to the clock that was on Claire's nightstand. It was six in the morning. He groaned and rolled over to fall back to sleep. He usually went to bed at this time! How can she just expect him to wake up at this hour when he was still getting used to the sleeping pattern that was forced upon him? One cannot just so easily switch from a nocrturnal to a diurnal pattern!

Claire placed her hands on her hips when she saw him roll over in defiance. He would not defy her! Not when she was the one who had to help him deal with the things that he needed to do! Now when she put her neck out for him, her reputation was on the line for his rehabilitation and settling his debt and certainly not when there were things to do around the farm! She growled as she grabbed the rope hammock and flipped it over. With a yelp, Skye fell to the floor of the small house. He growled as he sat up, tears in his eyes and rubbing his head.

"What was that for?!" He demanded.

"Get up! Your probation starts today." She ordered. Claire was already dressed in her usual attire of an orange and white checker shirt and blue overalls. She held out a portable device to show to him. "This is what you need to stay near if you don't want to get in trouble." Her finger turned from pointing from the device to his ankle prison.

"Fine, fine..." He murmured under his breath before standing up. "What do you want me to do? Milk your cows? Tend to your crops or something?"

"Weed." He stared at her as though an extra eyeball had suddenly appeared in the middle of her forehead. "You are going to pick up all of the weeds around my property and around the other fertile sites around town. You can send them in the shipping box and Mayor Thomas will pay you for it."

"And how much do weeds cost?" He asked, thinking about how many weeds that there would be for him to easily pay off his debt.

"One gold."

"WHAT?!"

"One gold for each weed. We start off small and you'll work your way up by earning it."

"You've gotta be kidding me! That'll take forever!" Skye couldn't believe it. The witch was doing this on purpose. But for what reason? To be mean? As extra punishment for stealing some of her strawberries? He smirked and stood up, regaining his composure. He flipped his silver bangs from his face and flashed her a charming and seductive smile. "I understand. You just want to keep me around longer. You want me to be yours."

"Wh-wh-..." Claire stammered, her face turning crimson. "What?!" His smirk increased when he saw her flustered reaction.

“Just admit it, Claire. You can't get enough of me.” Claire regained her composure and smirked.

“Just for that, you're to forfeit half of the weeds that you get to me for today for sexual harassment.”

“Wh-wha-?!” It was Skye's turn to stutter, however different the circumstance. “You can't do that!”

“Watch me.” Claire said in a low, dark voice and she whiped around, her hair flying behind her as she stormed off.

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