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santinodemarco1
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:52 pm


She Has A Heart Of Ice

This poem has contributed greatly to my dream avi.



She has a Heart Of Ice.
Nothing can touch her.
She seems invincible.
Gliding the way she does.
Speaking how she chooses.
Doing what she does best.
It's wondrous how one person can be as strong as she.
On the outside she's as strong as can be.
Her skin cold.
Her lips soft but firm.
Her long white dress to keep her safe.
The long brunette hair is the only color you'll see around her.
She flows through the halls with her icy chill.
When she speaks, it's as though her voice is only meant for you.
She's very convincing you see.
It's all a part of her image.
Keeping up with it isn't hard for her.
She never breaks down.
Never gives up.
Always having the same mission in mind.
Everyone else has no idea what her deal is.
She never lets anyone in.
And if you're wondering why,
take a look at this.
Heart of Gold.
Mind of Solid.
Body of Soul.
Spirit of All Beings.
He was everything.

It was found of the shores of her home land,
some while ago.
Many believe it was about a man she loved.
One who turned her down.
One who died.
Which myth is true no one but the Queen herself shall know.
But for now she remains the Sorceress.
Nothing can get her.
No one can touch her.
She's the just the girl of mystery.
Never aging.
Never forgiving.
Maybe one day she will open up.
And tell you her story.
Maybe one day her Heart Of Ice
will turn into a Heart of Love.
For now, we suffer.
Until her reign is no longer.
Someone save her.
Please forgive her.
That's all she needs.
Is love.
Something she may never get.
Something she needs the most.
Something no one realizes will solve it all.
No one wants her.
No one likes her.
No one understands her.
You think there's always that one person.
But she has no one.
And no one has her.
And even if it takes a life time.
I know she will wait forever.
Because
she
is
me.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:53 pm


Lovely surprise at the end; I'd love to be that strong. Your words seem effortless, although you probably did spend a lot of time on it. I just mean it flows very naturally. I like it very much.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 12:16 pm


Actually, that's how I write. Everything just flows out of me. I don't think about things, but every once in a while I'll have to stop and rewind. And sometimes I go back like a month or two later and change some things.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 1:39 pm


Jealous....I wish I could write beautiful poetry like that.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:24 pm


Honestly, it did take me some time to develop my technique.
I used to just try and force things out, but the fact of the matter is, you just have to let it go.
Try carrying a notebook around or just some keep some scraps of paper with you at all times and eventually you'll just think of something and starting forming ideas. Once you form ideas write it down. Even on your hand if you have to.
Sometimes when you're just bored you can stare at a paper for hours and just think. THAT is the first step. Staring. I know it may be weird, but it get the process moving. Also, closing your eyes and just drawing or writing whatever can help too. Things take time.

Trust me, I started out like crap, but every once in a while my feelings just get to me. Actually I have a few more that I typed out in my journal that I think I might as well post tonight. If you ever need help with words or anything, I'd be more than happy to help. Or even just another technique to share.
I write everything. Songs. Poetry. Stories. Fan Fics. Sometimes/Rarely Journals - But I do : D
And I love love love to edit things = D
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