|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:09 pm
FAKE FRiENDS: Never ask for food.REAl FRiENDS: are the reason you have no food.FAKE FRiENDS: Call your parents Mr/MrsREAl FRiENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOMFAKE FRiENDS: bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.REAl FRiENDS: Would sit next to you sayin "Damn ... we ******** up ... but that s**t was fun!"FAKE FRiENDS: never seen you cry.REAl FRiENDS: cry with you FAKE FRiENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back. REAl FRiENDS: keep your s**t so long they forget its yours. FAKE FRiENDS: know a few things about you. REAl FRiENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from you. FAKE FRiENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing. REAl FRiENDS: Will kick the whole crowds a** that left you. FAKE FRiENDS: Would knock on your front door. REAl FRiENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME!" FAKE FRiENDS: Are for awhile. REAl FRiENDS: Are for life. FAKE FRiENDS: Will take your drink away when they think you've had enough. REAl FRiENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place and say "b***h drink the rest of that you know we don't waste s**t."FAKE FRiENDS: will talk s**t to the person who talks s**t about you. REAl FRiENDS: Will knock them the ******** out I live by this and always have.
Though there are some people I know,
Who dont follow this,
and blame me for things I never did.
I forgive them though,
Cause thats what I was taught to do,
Forgive.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:30 am
As a piece of writing there is a very refreshing format and feeling I get from this. It brings up memories in each reader by bringing up general ideas of relations between people. It's very effective and I think I'll read it over several more times to keep enjoying it.
As a philosophy, I find a few parts of this to be inaccurate. Since this is a writing forum I'm not sure if you'd like me to state my opinion on that or not. If so, please let me know and I'd be happy to explain further.
Also, I'm impressed with your poems from the other posts. I'm just mentioning it here because I want you to know and I'm too tired to go into detail yet about why I like them.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:12 am
patience1984 As a piece of writing there is a very refreshing format and feeling I get from this. It brings up memories in each reader by bringing up general ideas of relations between people. It's very effective and I think I'll read it over several more times to keep enjoying it. As a philosophy, I find a few parts of this to be inaccurate. Since this is a writing forum I'm not sure if you'd like me to state my opinion on that or not. If so, please let me know and I'd be happy to explain further. Also, I'm impressed with your poems from the other posts. I'm just mentioning it here because I want you to know and I'm too tired to go into detail yet about why I like them.
As a realist, these are things Ive come to learn and find truth.
I have my own stories, but Ill leave those for another time.
and thank you again ^_^
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:01 am
|
Faithes light Vice Captain
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:23 am
patience1984 As a piece of writing there is a very refreshing format and feeling I get from this. It brings up memories in each reader by bringing up general ideas of relations between people. It's very effective and I think I'll read it over several more times to keep enjoying it. As a philosophy, I find a few parts of this to be inaccurate. Since this is a writing forum I'm not sure if you'd like me to state my opinion on that or not. If so, please let me know and I'd be happy to explain further. Also, I'm impressed with your poems from the other posts. I'm just mentioning it here because I want you to know and I'm too tired to go into detail yet about why I like them. I wish more people spoke like this today. You described something so beautifully. I wish people would start to realize the beauty of learning. A wide vocabulary will come in handy in the future, plus it pays off to be intelligent. wink
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:48 am
Kreative-Artizt I wish more people spoke like this today. You described something so beautifully. I wish people would start to realize the beauty of learning. A wide vocabulary will come in handy in the future, plus it pays off to be intelligent. wink It was very considerate for you to express that to me. I'm still revising my writing in my rpg (feel free to click my signature to view it) because I'm quite harsh on myself about the quality of my posts. Thank you for expressing your thoughts to me; it really brightened up my day.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:48 pm
ExileDeath FAKE FRiENDS: Never ask for food.REAl FRiENDS: are the reason you have no food.FAKE FRiENDS: Call your parents Mr/MrsREAl FRiENDS: Call your parents DAD/MOMFAKE FRiENDS: bail you out of jail and tell you what you did was wrong.REAl FRiENDS: Would sit next to you sayin "Damn ... we ******** up ... but that s**t was fun!"FAKE FRiENDS: never seen you cry.REAl FRiENDS: cry with you FAKE FRiENDS: Borrow your stuff for a few days then give it back. REAl FRiENDS: keep your s**t so long they forget its yours. FAKE FRiENDS: know a few things about you. REAl FRiENDS: Could write a book about you with direct quotes from you. FAKE FRiENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing. REAl FRiENDS: Will kick the whole crowds a** that left you. FAKE FRiENDS: Would knock on your front door. REAl FRiENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME!" FAKE FRiENDS: Are for awhile. REAl FRiENDS: Are for life. FAKE FRiENDS: Will take your drink away when they think you've had enough. REAl FRiENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place and say "b***h drink the rest of that you know we don't waste s**t."FAKE FRiENDS: will talk s**t to the person who talks s**t about you. REAl FRiENDS: Will knock them the ******** out I live by this and always have.
Though there are some people I know,
Who dont follow this,
and blame me for things I never did.
I forgive them though,
Cause thats what I was taught to do,
Forgive. ayee yo
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 6:08 pm
I agree with this entire thing.
I wouldnt see it as a poem,
Yet a collection of knownledge a person has gathered over the years.
This world is diteriating and its growing weaker.
People dont know what loyalty is and it annoys me.
To see friends hurt friends only to succed in life.
Amen to all those who would have their friends back until the end.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 3:11 pm
patience1984 Kreative-Artizt I wish more people spoke like this today. You described something so beautifully. I wish people would start to realize the beauty of learning. A wide vocabulary will come in handy in the future, plus it pays off to be intelligent. wink It was very considerate for you to express that to me. I'm still revising my writing in my rpg (feel free to click my signature to view it) because I'm quite harsh on myself about the quality of my posts. Thank you for expressing your thoughts to me; it really brightened up my day. I think if everyone were a bit nicer these days everyone's day would be brightened one way or another. I'm just glad it made you happy! I like making people happy especially when they deserve the compliment. Your writing is very intelligent. I bet you write some kick-a essays, stories, and more! =D
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 4:33 pm
Kreative-Artizt patience1984 Kreative-Artizt I wish more people spoke like this today. You described something so beautifully. I wish people would start to realize the beauty of learning. A wide vocabulary will come in handy in the future, plus it pays off to be intelligent. wink It was very considerate for you to express that to me. I'm still revising my writing in my rpg (feel free to click my signature to view it) because I'm quite harsh on myself about the quality of my posts. Thank you for expressing your thoughts to me; it really brightened up my day. I think if everyone were a bit nicer these days everyone's day would be brightened one way or another. I'm just glad it made you happy! I like making people happy especially when they deserve the compliment. Your writing is very intelligent. I bet you write some kick-a essays, stories, and more! =D I think I'm a bit too much of a perfectionist to post my anything in the writing sub forum. I'll stop now though; people tend to get annoyed when I bash myself. I'll admit I am intelligent and talented in SOME ways. So we are better off dropping it. Thanks again, though!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
