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Cowgirl Pin-up! [Closed, I finished. c:]

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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:19 pm

I was happy with her when I started on this, and compared to the orginal sketch she looks WAY bettah.
But something about her is seriously screwed up, and I can't quite put my finger on it....
Help?
Thanks in advance!

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:17 pm

Well I noticed her head is too small, its not portioned with the rest of her body. But thats the only flaw I can really see. I hope this helps. smile

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Bashful Strawberry

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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 7:13 pm

Thanks!

But I'm donnne. c:

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