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 Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:16 pm
I went at mid night no one was there i called out were r u at show your self. then this little robot came down from the ruined building. " are you the one name Max from San Diego " the robot said i said yes then from the wall to the right of me a man with hair as white as snow showed him self. he said 'have u heard of the legend of the two phoenixes and the two dragons it say when the dark dragon appers that two phoenixes will come together to defeat the dark dragons'. then he points to me saying 'u r the first phoenix the one taken by the dragon aka dark Max was the other come with me if you want to save her'.
The End of Chapter One
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:26 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:44 pm
Good but not great... pirate
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 4:54 pm
you have a big imagination Robert
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andycamacho50 Vice Captain
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