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Remlik

PostPosted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:35 pm


Character's name: Remlik Nuitap (Rem-lick New-i-tap)
Aliases/Nicknames: none yet
Age: 15
Occupation: Student
Reiatsu color: Lime green with black tendrils
Apperance: Remlik is a tall, decently built, young shinigami. whose most prominent feature is either his snow white hair that always falls in his face, or his eyes which always show how he truly feels. He has a very childish. almost soft looking, face with gentle hands that move like lightning.
Accesories: Remlik always carries a pendent around his neck which holds a special mixture of substances used in his signature techniques.
Personality: Remlik is a laid back person usually, never very stressed but usually very bored. He gets along with just about everyone adn doesn't really care if they don't like him. But if you anger him, he can become a dangerous weapon. He holds certain things in high regards...but rarely cares about others. His keen sense of nobility and chivalry from his knight training still remain threaded through the rest of his personality. He often finds himself on the defensive side of someone being attacked, be it physical or mental, even if he didn't like the person. Unlike some shinigami who are critical of other races, Remlik has no care what someone is born as. He believes a person isn't born, they are made from the sum of their memories and life experiences.
Bio/History: Remlik was born in a year, yet to be named by man. He was the son of Lord Lancelot of Arthur's round table. He worked hard training to become a Knight of the Round Table. But fate struck its cruel hand, and a band of Germanic warriors razed his village. Out for revenge, the fool hardy young boy searched down the warriors and challenged their leader to a battle. The warrior laughed in his face and stepped forward to face the boy. In response, Remlik raised his blade, but the warrior struck it out of his hand with a single blow. 'any last words boy?' the warrior leader asked as he placed the tip of his blade to Remlik's neck. All he had to say was 'vengeance is a cruel thing'. Remlik woke up as a soul, wandering around soul society, lost and alone. A few years later Remlik applied for the Shinigami Academy, because something inside of him, a voice almost, was telling him he needed to learn more. to accomplish his one true goal.

Kidou: (none when you start; you will add them as you will learn)
Abilities: (none when you start, you will add them as you will learn)
Skills:
Swordsmanship: talented
Kidou: average
hand to hand: below average

Accomplished classes: (classes you have already accomplished, none at the beginning)
Pending classes: (classes you're currently taking)

Favourite Subject: Swordsmanship
Disliked Subject: Hand to hand combat
Favourite teacher: Cerdwin Alcina, for he respects her.
Disliked teacher: Keiteki Eki, jerks aren't his style
Expectations: Remlik expects that the teachers at the academy are all highlevel and will actually give him a challenge. he could use one.

optional:
Likes: growing stronger, reflecting, a good fight
Dislikes: being let down, interruptions, annoying people, and anyone who dares lay a finger on his friends
Theme song: Falling down ~ Atreyu
Hobbies: practicing his skills and reflecting
Quirks: Remlik tends to play with his hair and constantly pushes it out of his eyes.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:14 am


I'd apreacciate if you didn't call a member of our staff a jerk. The overall impression is quite okay, though it would be nice if you could expand at least the personality section a bit. And please explain the "mixture of substances used in his signature techniques". What are those techniques? Remember that you are not allowed to know any when entering the academy, but you can post them here to have them later, only mark them as unachieved.

ezzelinn
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Remlik

PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:47 pm


Oh i apologize, i only used it because thats what it said in his profile. And ok, i will see to expanding the personality. I would expand on the mixtures if i had a further idea for it, i know the direction of his techniques i plan to go in, but not the techniques themselves. This is a new Zanpaktou im trying so i have to figure out what im doing. sweatdrop I like to make new ones when i join a different thread. So it keeps me interested.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:55 pm


Okay, so just expand the personality a bit, and it's accepted.
If the signature attacks refer to his zanpakuto, you still have plenty of time to devise them, and we will discuss that later, so it's not absolutely neccessary to explain them now.

ezzelinn
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Remlik

PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:44 pm


Well im 100% sure in Shikai its going to heighten and add attributes to the attack but i think he will learn it later. And ok, i will have that done.
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