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Awesome Sensei
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:24 pm


Character's name: Keiteki Eki (ka-eye-te-key eh-Key)

Aliases/Nicknames: Crimson Knight

Age: 500 although looks to be in the mid twentys

Occupation: Teacher

Reiatsu color: Silver, with specs of white

Apperance: Keiteki is a very dark looking person. At first glance he is a character, looking like a beast with long silver hair the covers the front of his face and extends down to his stomach. He has a shadow of hair over his chin that is also silver. He looks like an older teenager, in his prime. His muscles show through his sleeveless black shirt, and his Hakama is a grey color instead of black. His silver hair is tied back normally when in a fight, although it is always well groomed. He has bright blue eyes that can turn a bright silver in battle, which give him a different attitude. He is tall at about 6'3. He is medium built with very little fat on his body, with large hands and a white skin even though he has been outside for a very long time, he tans very badly. He had very little scars on his body, but a single scar across his left arm that is on his upper arm shows he has been in more serious fights.

Accesories: Keiteki has a pearl necklace. It is dark red and glows when it is in use. It can only be used when it is on, when it is taken off its effect goes away. its purpose is to hold back Keiteki's massive amounts of reiatsu, in case of any sort of attack, He can hold back his strength as to not cause his opponent unnessisisary amounts of pain. He has no other accessories besides the necklace. This necklace is always in use, even though Keiteki does not have as much reaitsu as a teacher.

Personality: Keiteki is a jerk. He stays away from others. He wishes to get strong enough to make his teachers fight him, and even then he wants to be able to win. He works hard to not dissapoint anyone who needs his help, and if trusted on a task he will work with it to the end. He is always in need of a challenge or he will fight people. He often sharpens his blade, for he treats it like a partner.

Bio/History:Keiteki is the b*****d son of Ketsu Eki. He has no life before entering the shinigami academy, his only goal is to be noticed. After his birth around thirty years ago, he spent his life as a lonely man, having just enough money and supplies to live without poverty. He had an average life until learning of his heritage, and took the last name Eki. His goal became to outdo his father in every way, and he picked up the blade, noticing great skill with it. He also inherited a red pearl necklace that helps him hold back all his strength, perfect for training. He entered the academy to show his father his worth.

Zanpakuto


Zanpakuto name: 銀製の中心 Ginmekki no Chuushin (It literally translates as "Heart made of silver")

Zanpakuto spirit: Ginmekki is a very dark figure. He is usually seen as a shadow and acts like a fatherly figure to Keiteki. He is very kind and takes a humanoid form. He is taller then Keiteki by a few inches and has long silver hair, falling down to his knees. He has a very low pitched voice and manifests himself infront of new students to look scary. He is actually a trouble maker at times and is the farthest away from a "stick in the mud" He tends to make a fool out of himself, yet as soon as they enter battle he is a beast, using his full power to destroy the enemy.

Spiritual world: A simple river. It is flowing with silver blood and glowing brightly. The sun glows faintly and it is fairly warm. A sense of happiness always shows itself when in here, and a fight has never taken place, only slight training and intellectual training. Keiteki is smart, so instead of combat training, which he is obviously talented in, he is trained in his spirits, and his morale.

Zanpakuto element: Blood based. If this weapon could be based off of an element it would be that, because it has no other attribute.

Sealed zanpakuto appearance: A simple zanpakutou, with a dark silver hilt, and a red blade. The dark red blade looks rather evil in appearance, the blade so dark it almost looks black. The hilt of the weapon has a silver wrap, and the sheath looks slightly worn, a few inches longer then the blade itself to allow a quick draw easier. The sheath almost drags to the floor, while the blade itself it average in size. It has no real defense, although it has an extremely sharp edge, looking rather neat of a blade, with a old and worn out sheath. The blade looks like something of a beast, red blood dripping from it at random times.

Shikai:

Release incantation: 銀製の血は私の中心の穴から注ぐ! Ginmekki ni chi wa watashi no chuushin no ana kara sosogu! (Silver blood pour out of the holes in my heart. Ginmekki!")

Shikai description: Ginmekki's true form is a very long blade, although not very thick, it is extremely fast. The blade is at least the length of a katana, with an extra foot, the color of the blade a bright silver color. The hilt of the weapon is bright red, and droplets of blood are constantly falling from the weapon. The droplets are different depending on what color blood is in use. The silver blood has its own ability, It hurts like acid, and it is used for pure strength. depending on how much reaitsu is placed into the blade, it can have more or less acidity. There is more blood depending on how long Keiteki has been in a battle.

*note* this weapon can either use red or silver blood. The red blood is FAR weaker then the silver blood, and when it is in use, the shikai is much weaker then normal, although has the same abilities as if it was silver blood. The red blood is to make his shikai seem like it is already at full power for the students.

Shikai abilites

Shinku no Eikyou 深紅の影響 (crimson influence)
Blood is focused to the blade, with the hilt glowing intensely. This attack uses the blood of both Keiteki and his enemies. When slashing them with this attack, the blood will fall down from either his own, or the blood he got from his enemy, and he can use that to heal himself, and allow himself to continue fighting. This attack is not much of an attacking ability, and does not cause extra damage, yet it perfect for long amounts of combat.

Keizen Kou 鋼炯然 (radiant Steel)
A sharp amount of reiatsu is compressed into blood, focusing into a single layer of blood that soaks directly over the blade. This makes Keiteki's blade glow so brightly that it barely shows. The blood is then focused to the tip of the blade, and Keiteki can do a upfront attack, or can slash the blast outward at the size of a gigantic blood burst. This cannot last longer then a few seconds, with the compressed energy.

Gouon Jou 轟音獣 (roaring beast)
A large amount of reiatsu and blood fuse and encircle Keiteki. In an instant it explodes in a radius attack, depending on how much blood is in the attack, and how much reaitsu is placed into it, it can be used to stop attacks, or to launch enemies into the oppisite direction, it is almost inpenitrable for the short amount of time it bursts outward, and its deadly so it can stop enemies in there tracks.


Bankai:

Release incantation: あなたの黒くされた中心の原因より明るく光る私の血 Anata no kurokusareta chuushin no genin yori akaruku hikaru watashi no chi! (May your blackened heart cause my blood to glow even brighter! Ginmekki no Chuushin!)

Bankai description When entering shikai, Ginmmekki breaks into a bunch of pieces, each shard of blade stabbing into Keiteki's arm, and sending silver blood across his arm. This blood solidifies into a solid blood mass that is silver in color. The mass is skin tight, and a blade can launch out of any part of the arm. A blade is always stationary at the tip of the hand, the size and look of that the same as his shikai, yet multiple different blades can be used to re enforce the weapon. While in this form, blood bursts can release themselves easily, making him a deadly short range fighter.

After being in the fight for a long period of time, or after enough blood has been gathered, Keiteki can use this to send the blood up his shoulder. Like this he is faster and stronger, being able to use his shoulder more freely, and whenever he is attacked, his acid blood will quickly burn the wound, and heal it slightly. The burns are extremely painful, and usually cause him to collapse after a while, which is why this form is rarely used.

If that does not succeed, then Keiteki lets the acid blood travel further up his body, all the way to his face, covering it and making him suffer. Extreme pain fills him, and he has exactly one minute (one post) to complete his actions before passing out. His eyes become hazzy and his attacks gain a lot of power, with complete motion, he is well beyond his limits, and if he keeps going after his one minute (one post) he can die.

Bankai abilites

Weaken Weaken makes the bankai weaker. the blood solidifed as red blood on the right arm, this attack is used to teach students bankai, and to make sure they do not die, this restrains all bankai abilites and is very usefull for weaker enemies, this ability can be negated in an instant.

Twisted blade of fate Multiple blades surround the one stationary blade, making it more powerful, this is pernament yet has a constant strain of reiatsu going through it, sapping Keiteki's strength in the process.

burst of devils acid A large tidal wave of blood is sent forward, silver slashes of blood filling the tidal wave, anyone caught inside this large mess of blood will feel the sting of a thousand blades all upon them in an instant, with the sting of acid filling there veins.


Kidou: 1-40 (but only cause he has to know them.)
Abilities: Extremely high reiatsu level, although a very slow regan rate.
Skills: swordsmanship: outstanding
hand to hand: average
kidou: below average

Subject: sword play
Expectations: Students are tool of learning for the teacher, if those tools don't work, then they gonna suffer!
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:31 am


Well, I understand that you're not a bio person, however you still have to fulfill the minimum of one paragraph like everyone else.
Then, I would like you to define "massive amount of reiatsu". It cannot be yet on a teacher's level, you'll have to get there, but you can state for example that his reiatsu level is exceptionally high for a student. This profile, as anyone else's, will change as your character learns and develops, that's why in needs to have only basics and good predisposition.

ezzelinn
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Awesome Sensei
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:16 pm


alrigth I fixed it, sorry about that... I guess I kinda acted like a mod in a guild I am not a mod in razz
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:36 am


Accepted.

I hope that last line about professor Rin is meant as a joke, because we do not tolerate personal arguments between the rp-ers to have effect on their characters.

BadAyka
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ezzelinn
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:45 am


First of all, the occupation still says "student". As well some of the other info are still obviously left from the student profile, and are not acceptable in a teacher's profile. The age, as well - he cannot be so young and yet be a teacher; even Kaede is young for a teacher and she's well over 300! Same goes for bio.

Now, as for the bankai - the appearance explanation is rather vague; no matter how hard I try I cannot imagine what you wanted to describe. And.. add attacks. But please, don't exaggerate.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:40 pm


done ^^

Awesome Sensei
Crew


ezzelinn
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:58 am


1. Personality and history still look like you're a student.
origin blood
He wishes to get strong enough to make his teachers fight him.

And if you are a teacher, you need some history, you can't just "enter the academy" as you wrote in the bio.

2. Add max reach for the "burst of devils acid" attack. And for the "Gouon Jou" as well.
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