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Character's name: Zaine Tsukioma (Tsu-ki-oma)

Aliases/Nicknames: Whatever his friends wish to call him.

Age:16

Occupation: Student

Reiatsu color:Gold tinged with crimson

Apperance: He is about 5'10ft with a light athletic build, his hair is dark brown and mid-length, meaning that it covers his ears, his eyes are gold flecked with crimson. His face is extremely expressive and he almost always has a smile, his eyes also seem to posses an inner flame, one that usually shows his true feelings no matter what his facial expression is. In lieu of traditional Shinigami wear, Zaine wears a black cloak, the hood of which is lined with the fur of what seems to be something of Lupine origin, the fur is soft and seemingly resistant to most types of damage, within the cloak are an unknown number of hidden pockets, in which Zaine carries various items. Zaine wears simple looking, loose black pants that are made of the same durable material that his cloak is.

Accesories:
a unique cross that he always wears, it has two crescent moons that cross each other leaving a space between them exposing the trunk of the cross. The moon on the left is obsidian and the moon on the right is Ivory, the cross itself is silver, Zaine cannot lose the cross nor can he remember who gave it to him, for as long as he has been a member of the soul society he has worn the cross. The cross itself seems to posses an aura of safety, as if someone was watching over the wearer.....

Personality: Zaine is the proverbial joker, he usually has a smile on his face and is known to try to get even his opponents to chuckle during a fight, this friendliness is completely genuine, however he knows that it tends to throw an opponent off and will take that advantage to execute a surprising tacital manuver. Above all other things, he always looks out for friends and commrades before his own well being.

Bio/History: When Zaine arrived at the Soul Society all he had to his name was his sword and his good nature. When he was alive he was just an average junior in highschool, however he could see and interact with the recent dead. Zaine was a laid back student, not quite thinking about his future but always the philantropist he helped those in need, giving them shelter and food. Zaine's family died in a fire leaving him alone, but for his friends. Zaine's death was offically unknown, however he was actually killed by a rampaging hollow when he tried to protect a small child from being consumed. He arrived in the Sereitei confused and lost, that is until he saw the Gotei 13, at that very moment he knew what he wanted to do here, become a great Shinigami and protect the innocent, he made this his goal and entered the Academy, determined to prove himself.

Kidou: Cannot use Kidou at all.

Abilities: (Advanced Reiatsu Manipulation- Zaine can use his own Reiatsu in various ways, both offensive and defensive. Mostly he channels it to various points on his body (Arms, legs, feet, palms, ect...) however he has specialty attacks that require training to learn, these he developed and honed himself. Zaine has trained himself to excel in this ability due to his nearly nonexistant Kidou abilities.

Offensive:

Za kiri tsunzaku tenjou (The drill to break the heavens) - Zaine preforms this technique by channeling reiatsu to the hilt of his sword, then by spinning his sword at blinding speeds until it appears he is holding a razordisk in his hand, then Zaine sends the reiatsu in the hilt equally to the tip of each blade in a steady stream. The reiatsu 'threads' then twine together,and are propelled forward at blinding speeds towards Zaine's target. This technique can become quite draining after extended use, and it can pierce some basic kidou spells, cancelling them by disrupting their composistion.

Himei reikon roudou sougi (Screaming spirit strike)- Zaine channels and concentrates a large amount of reiatsu to his palm which, upon contact woth an enemy he releases in the form of explosive energy into their body, causing massive damage and occasionally a broken bone, if overused he temporarily loses use of his hand that he launched the attack from.

Tooboe reikon (Howling spirit lance)- Channeling reiatsu to his fingertips Zaine launches needle-like projectiles at his target at blinding speeds, this attack is only useful for its speed and small energy consumption. However he can fully charge a single finger and send a massive lance of reiatsu at an enemy with destructive results, at the cost of speed.

Crescent strike (Proper name pending): Zaine channels his reiatsu into his sword blades, using the reiatsu he increases the striking and cutting power of the blades and can release the stored reiatsu in the form of razor sharp blades of reiatsu that fly at an opponent, if these blades are cut through or have a kidou cast upon them they split in the center and form two smaller crescents that fly at an opponent. (Note: Does not track enemies, remains generally on original path.)

Defensive:

Meimei hakarigoto, Yuuen nankan (Divine plan, Grand barrier) - By releasing pulses of consecutive, high speed reiatsu Zaine is to generate a barrier to protect himself, this lasts for a short time because it is his most draining of abilities, afterword he is barely able to preform his Tooboe reikon ability and unable to preform the others at all, this move is for critical situations only.

Myakuhaku hanshou / Myakuhaku hen hari (Pulse deflection/Pulse reflection)- Essentially Zaine releases bursts of Reiatsu from points on his body, either to deflect an attack or reflect a projectile attack back to the sender.

Spirit bracers (Proper name pending)- Zaine concentrates a layer of reiatsu on his forearms that are able to halt most close range attacks and occasionally kidou, he can launch the reiatsu at an opponent and if it makes contact it can break bone. It is only effective against kidos 1-50 and their equivilent in power (Cero, Bount skills, ect..) Can withstand B ranked power physical attacks {Require training}

Skills: Swordsmanship: Talented
Kidou: Nonexistant
Hand to hand: Average

Accomplished classes: (classes you have already accomplished, none at the beginning)
Pending classes:

Favourite Subject: *pending*

Disliked Subject: *pending*

Favourite teacher: *pending*

Disliked teacher: *pending*
Expectations: He expects that if he gives his best, the teachers will do the same.

optional:
Likes: Food, friends, sparring, experimenting with new moves.
Dislikes: Jerks, people who are too serious all the time
Theme song: N/A
Hobbies: Cooking, Drawing, being out in the fresh air.
Quirks: Is always a joker, even in a fight. However this leads most opponents to underestimate him, allowing Zaine to use tactical advantages and deafeat a shocked opponent.

Okay, first of all you cannot just state see picture for clothes, you have to describe as well, even if you do have a picture. Then, I would like you to expand your personality section.

As for the abilities, I think it was decided that you learn them later, on your own as a compensation for kidou. It wouldn't be actually fair to start with such an array of offensive and defensive skills while other can't know nothing. Please mark them as unachieved (you can put them in red, for example).

Expand: write more about your character's personality.

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