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DARK NEBULA7

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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 4:57 pm

i wont be mean
it does look like u really tried which i approve of
work on the body

Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:44 pm

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TBh it's not very good.

The head is far too long and the neck is too wide and big. Boobs are uneven and the arms are just curved. Unless your person doesn't have bones in her arms then that's how they should be. Legs are so far apart you get no sense of lower body.

Sorry if that is harsh critique but you need it. I'm sure you will improve with practice.

This isn't being mean. It's helping. All these asoects are good, and WILL help you out as an artist. I myself am nowhere near proffessional.

And Miss Extreme. Just work on cleaning up your colouring. Overall, pretty good. biggrin

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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:32 pm

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TBh it's not very good.

The head is far too long and the neck is too wide and big. Boobs are uneven and the arms are just curved. Unless your person doesn't have bones in her arms then that's how they should be. Legs are so far apart you get no sense of lower body.

Sorry if that is harsh critique but you need it. I'm sure you will improve with practice.

This isn't being mean. It's helping. All these asoects are good, and WILL help you out as an artist. I myself am nowhere near proffessional.

And Miss Extreme. Just work on cleaning up your colouring. Overall, pretty good. biggrin

xD I agree. It's not being mean at all, it's just helping.
You should take all critiques as a good thing really.
They do help a lot, especially in other arts. ^^
But yeah, maybe if you 'copied' other animes, to get the hang of how their eyes are drawn, the face body so on. It's pretty much how i improved. I'm horrible with guides and stuff xD

Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:07 pm

its not bad i like how u colored it it could be better tho!!!!!!^^

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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:33 pm

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TBh it's not very good.

The head is far too long and the neck is too wide and big. Boobs are uneven and the arms are just curved. Unless your person doesn't have bones in her arms then that's how they should be. Legs are so far apart you get no sense of lower body.

Sorry if that is harsh critique but you need it. I'm sure you will improve with practice.

Ohh hiss hiss

yeah really! gosh. some ppl. be more nice when ur being mean! >:O lol

ah. But as long as it's not a critique like "LIEK THAT SUX0RZ |:<" or "N00B"
Then it's fine.
But, yeah. The proportions are really edgy, it might needs some smoothing out. And the head seems too big, I don't think it should be so big it seems like a camera is at her face. Even in chibi form, I would feel awkward looking at it. [I'm really sorry if that one statement was too harsh D:]
And the lower body part, some people just run out of room, or don't feel like sketching it out sometimes. We can't judge if you suck or not in the lower part.
Overall....I think it has a lot of potential. Keep working at it. smile

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