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Hi everyone im Tydradrenn, Tydra for short.

I was trying to make my character profile and I got really confused, I haven't rped in ages so this is almost kinda new to me again crying . this is what I got so far.

Gaian Name: Tydradrenn
Character Full Name: Myonic Anakari
Age: Looks 13 but much older
Gender: Female
Race: Half Breed, Angel and Demon
Appearance:
Medium left white hair with streaks of black.
One cerulean eye (Right.) One crimson eye (Left)
About 105lbs.
(This is where I am stuck on her height and so on.)
Personality:
She has an extremely dark and twisted personality almost like a pure demon from hell even though she is a half breed of Demon and Angel, the demon side of her is mostly in control. When the angel side of Myonic comes out she has a harder time to go anywhere and is more afraid of herself and her powers at the current time.
Weapons:
Demon: Wings, claws and can use her blood to conduct different forms of weapons (If you read vampire knight you might known what im thinking of.)
Angel: Wings, Staff and her "powers"
Skills:
Demon: Able to control the darkness is a person's heart to make her own powers and strength grow stronger. Able to blend into shadows at will and able to make a persons blood her main weapon.
Angel: (I don't know how to counter act the demons side.)
Background:
Myonic Anakari was born of a unnatural birth for a half breed, being born of part an angel and part demon her entire life was cast into hell because she was called a disgrace on both races. Her birth was not born from a woman giving birth to a baby but was placed born in the world at the age of 10, her first memories are faded by white mist that seems to affect her memories until she is 13 which still she doesn't know how she was born.

She carries a pendant that has a stone force to push her dark side from taking total control over her body.

(This is all I got crying please help.)

Have you watched the anime Chobits before, if you know Freya and chi's hair style its like that

For the age you should put what her age is, and comment on how young she looks in the appearance section, remember, the character sheet should always be as fact as possible not just what appears to be true. Apply that to her background too, she doesn't know what happened but you need to. Then for personality, you need to elaborate a lot, I suggest taking each personality on it's own as a paragraph or two, then a third describing the relaitonship between the two.

For weapons, since it's one person, and unless the RP you're playing does weapons-summoning, I'd advise you stick to a single weapon between them and just fight differently with it; such as the angel half will probably be far more defensive, and making low damage but disabling attacks when necessary, where the demon will probably have a crushing style ala Agito of Airgear who's fighting style is built to utterly destroy the enemy, leaving them scared and bloody, just for the fun of it. Along that line the demon is probably very weak defensively but ether far more accepting of pain, or masochistic.

Back to weapons, creating them from your blood is fine but I suggest you specify the ones you can create in your profile, since it's your blood and you're summoning it you probably can create anything you imagine, but I suspect you already have several in mind that you will more than likely call upon most often; Also you should add constraints, such as maybe they are being from your blood, constituting a blood loss, so summoning a lot of weapons, or large weapons would have the same effects as a rather large injury that had caused you to lose a significant portion of blood. Another thought, tying into your blood control ability, is that you can use any blood to form an object of any sort, within reason, so you're not limited to your own but you do need blood to get it done. That said...

The control over blood ability seems extremely overpowered, you need to add some conditions to that or it's going to be a big problem for you; something like a thing that has to be done before she can control somebody's blood, maybe she has to consume a portion of their blood first, or they have to consume some of hers, but as it stands if you can control blood you can kill anyone instantly without a fight.

You should rewrite the appearance section to be in paragraph form instead of a list, that's just a given. As that other guy mentioned talk about hair, but also clothes (and I suggest you steer away from goth-loli lest she become entirely stereotypical). Also, what is "Medium left white"?

As for height, 105 at 13 years old should be somewhere in the mid-upper 5' area I think, but you can look it up to be certain of you want.

Back to age. If you're really old, or even reasonably old, you've lived a lot and are more than likely a well adjusted person by now, tired of dealing with all the problems of a chaotic life, wise, and more than likely knowledgeable. I fully expect that if you play her as a 400 year old 13yearold it won't turn out well, so why not just make her actually 13? or later teens at most.

As far as I can tell the demon and angel sides are each fully developed and independent personalities, effectively different people in the same body, with my Agito example he shares his body with Akito, a kind guy who can't fight at all, likewise if your personalities are different people, they should have their own names.

Then last and certainly least I'd like to point out the humor of a halfbreed angel-demon. Demons are angels that fell from the light of god. Any angel that would procreate with a demon has fallen, and is no longer an angel, unless they were raped (...), and with the child cast down to hell she is also not technically an angel ether, though you could argue that with her split personality, the angel side could have remained untainted. This is all of course assuming the judeo-christian mythos.

say what?

Gaian Name: Tydradrenn
Character Full Name: Myonic Anakari
Age: Looks 13
Gender: Female
Race: Half Breed, Angel and Demon
Appearance:
Medium length white hair with streaks of black.
One cerulean eye (Right.) One crimson eye (Left)
About 105lbs.
About 5'1"

Personality:
The Demon side;
Extremely melancholy, brutal and destructive. While this side of her is shown the most out of both sides of her soul, while in this part of her sh's more likely to attack everyone and anything that walks and has a heartbeat, extremely untamed and blood lust is one of her major flaws.

The Angel Side; Extremely timid and hates to fight, being the weaker of both sides she usually stays inside of her own shell allowing the demon part to mostly run free. As more and more time passes she see's that the demon part isn't the only one who should be living and decides to fight for control over the body.

Both together: Each knowing of each others existence but fearing one another so much that they usually fight and cause strain upon the vessel there hosted in, after a while the demon side and angel side decide to become one leaving her with her own freewill and a new person all together.
Weapons:
Both use a weapon known as the Kirokiyo
http://www.swordssource.com/userfiles/image/Fantasy sword1.jpg (THAT)

Background:
Myonic Anakari was born of a unnatural birth for a half breed, being born of part an angel and part demon her entire life was cast into hell because she was called a disgrace on both races. Her birth was not born from a woman giving birth to a baby but was placed born in the world at the age of 10, her first memories are faded by white mist that seems to affect her memories until she is 13 which still she doesn't know how she was born.

She carries a pendant that has a stone force to push her dark side from taking total control over her body.

I advise heavily against align=center for blocks of text, it really doesn't look good unless you have enough text to fill out the width for most of the block's height.