Tell me what I'm doing right and wrong. Tell me what needs improvement and what doesn't (because we all know you can overdo things in an RP). I think the lack of members is most likely due to the fact that it's based off of KotOR which only a few Star Wars fans know about and it demands that you be literate and fairly advanced at RPing so that cuts out about half of gaia's Role Players. Although I still think that I could easily be doing something very wrong that drives people away.
Please critique my RP for me.