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PostPosted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:29 am


I do hope that I'm doing this right, often enough I'll think I know what I'm doing but be completely off. But yes, for the art. Looking at this picture, I feel proud and disappointed at the same time. I feel that I stepped up and did a good job but I also detest how the face looks.

Can anyone help me on how to go about drawing a better facial hair, or if you find anything else wrong with it, please don't hold back. Sometimes I can't tell the flaws that are staring me in the face unless someone points them out to me.


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:32 am


Ok the head is abit small,i like the cloths,and facial hair show a bit of age in a character perhaps you can give him a bit more of a larger build to help show the target age.

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