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 Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:30 pm
Captive
Forcebly taken to where you don't want to go,
If you'll ever return, no one knows,
Dragged to the beyond by some inscolent soul,
Eventually your mind will pay it's toll,
Now your in a place you don't know,
Alienated,hated and all alone,
Sorrounded by fear, lonlieness and mistrust,
Tortured all day, from dawn to dusk,
Now engulfed in pain,
Starting to grow insane,
You shed that last tear,
For now the end is here,
You put a knife to your heart,
Now is when eternal darkness starts
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 5:49 am
Captive:: rings of resignation... kinda sad, that.
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 10:51 am
can't say much more than: I like it... however makes me try to see beyond that cell (to give it a name) beyond eyesight and see who or what is it that keeps you ensnared... and then... sudden release...
wish there was more...
as usual...
hehe (can't blame me for wishing!)
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 5:40 am
Wow. That stung at some heartstrings.
Your words held me captive.
The images that formed in my mind were why I stayed there.
This is the type of poem that leaves an awed, thoughtful silence after it finishes.
Bravo.
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