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 Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:55 pm
(This is the remake Rose Adele Zeller asked me to do, she told me to change a bit.)
Name: Juliette Anadah Gracely
Gender:Female
Year:6th
House:Ravenclaw
Wand: 12 inches, Core biggrin ragon Heartstring, Outer Layer razz ine
Ethincinty:White(German,British)
Pet: A Burrowing Owl named Pasey
Hair/Eye color : Round blue eyes, and Wavy/Straight brown hair
Home Life : Juliette used to live in Ohio but now lives in the Southern Edge of London
Family :
Mom: Abigail Violet (Bowery) Gracely(Thirty-eight), Was born in England but married Dean Colin Gracely, a American, in 1973. She has brown wavy hair, and brown almond shaped eyes. She stays at home and watches the house and takes care of the family.
Dad: Dean Colin Gracely (43), was born in the United States. But moved to England so his children could be closer to their other grandparents. Dean has straight but shaggy caramel colored hair. He works in the Deparment of Magical Transportation.
Older Sister and Brother:
Zayleen Cara Gracely: Is Juliettes 17-year-old sister. She was the only one in her family to be in the House of Slytherin. She is a 7th year. Zayleen has straight, dark brown hair. She also has round shaped, brown eyes.
Bradley Nelson Gracely (22), Bradley works in a supply shop in Diagon Alley. Bradley is engaged to Georgina Olga Pester. Juliettes future sister in-law. They both of blonde hair except Georigna's hair is REALLY curly and Bradley's is shaggy. Bradley and Georgina were both in their 3rd year when they met in the House of Hufflepuff.
Younger Sister and Brothers:
Thomas Richard Gracely and Xavier William Gracely: Are Juliette's 8 year-old twin brothers. They love to bother their older sisters. They have caramel colored shaggy hair, and brown almond shaped eyes like their mothers.
Elsy Hanna Gracely: Is Juliette's 6 year-old sister. She wants to be like her sister. She has blonde, straight hair.
Diving Deeper: Juliette comes from tight knit family that strictly follows tradition. On her fathers side the third born child always has to open the their presents last on Chrismas day. Juliette didn't mind it. On her Mother's side the eldest has to watch over ALL of her brothers. Zayleen isn't thrilled on that one though, she always complains.
A Closer Look: Juliette got up on Chrismas Morning. She heard Zayleen ordering Xavier and Thomas around, which was normal since that was a tradition. Juliette loved Zayleen but sometimes, she could be just plain bossy. Juliette tromped down stairs.
"Zayleen!" Juliette yelled. "
What!" Zayleen was so pushy. "Don't you remember what mom said?"
"No..."
"You spose to watch Xavier and Thomas not order them around like your slaves."
"Those runts are so annoying though, you wouoldn't understand."
Then Xavier cried out "Look Juliette, I GOT YOUR WAND!"
"Now, I know what you mean Zayleen."
Juliette then snatched up her wand and hid it were the boys could not find it. Elsy was still in her bed sleeping, she was holding a plush owl that looked just like Pasey. Juliette always laughed at the plush, she didn't understand why Elsy always had to act like her.
Then Bradley came through the door with Georgina and hugged every- one in reach. "I missed you guys" Bradley said.
Everything was perfect now, all of her family except her grandparents were here (They were on vacation in Ireland and the others couldn't find tickets). Now she could have a good Christmas.
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:12 pm
You have been Accepted
to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
I must admit I'm a bit on-the-fence about accepting this profile.
While you did a good job outlining your character, there is still much detail
missing that could bring her to life. I'm going to give you the chance to
practice roleplaying with her in our guild though, because I believe you have
much potential. After all, practice makes perfect. Just please do me the favor
of visiting our 'improve your roleplay' threads. They really are quite helpful!
Without further ado, welcome to the guild and roleplay! Hope you enjoy it!
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