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King Shygon Darsania
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:05 am


"YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!" said the Nun chasing me as I run to my Room. I Ran as i was chased dwon from the cafeteria and to the door of my Bunk room.
" So ya got caught again trying to steal extra food huh?" Said Jaden Looking out the window. "yea....What ya looking at" i replied and asked. Jaden was The only family i had. My parents was killed in a War known as the unknown War and i was sent to an Orphanarium. jaden wore Blue dirty, worn out pants, and grey ripped Shirt, since we never Got new clothes till Christmas. "nothing....." he sighs " I wish if only we could escape from this place..." he says. I walked up to him and put my hand on his shoulder. " Dont worry jaden, we'll have a New home soon enough". he begins too look at the floor " I Hope soo...". The Nun busts through the door Red in the face and possibly smoke coming out of her ears. " uuhhh Shygon???? What Else did you do???" he asks scared and worried. " he lady, i think ya need to cool down, why dont ya use the Soup and poor it on your head, since its cold enough to cool Boil Point". i yell at the Nun. "

HOW DARE YOU YOU BRAT!!! Steal my Food, Insulted my cooking, and peeked into the girls restroom!!! thats 3 Strikes down! your in the Hole for the rest of the day till Night!" Jaden looks at me almost smirking " You peeked into the Girls Restroom?" i Glant back at him with a weird look on my face smirking " maaaaby.." The Nun with no hesitation Grabs me by the Collar of my worn out Shirt and Drags me outta the Room." Oh Come On! i was only Curious!" Jaden sighs " yup....thats Shy for ya.." As im drag through the Cafeteria the other orphans Glance at me. a bunch of Girls giggle at the site of me and i wink at them and yelled out "meet me here tonight girls!" the Nun Smacks me in the Face with a yard stick and continues to drag outside. she tosses me in the Hole thats about 10 feet deep " There! now sit down there and Think of what you have Done!" I sit and whisper to myself " heheh at least i had a glance eh eh eh". Minutes later i fell asleep. The most unusual thing happend. I was standing infront of a Big Castle surrounded by Ghost like creatures. and then all of a sudden a spirit flew towards me, saying "Its Time". then a light flashs from somewhere on my head and i woke up.

" Time to get out Shygon" says the Nun. i climb outta the pit and i head towards my Bunk room. i walk in and run into the Dean Holding a belt. i look behind him and see Jaden laying on the floor red with some blood. " This is none of your concern child, step aside" he says. " What did you do to him!?!?!?!?!?" he stares close into my eyes and says once more " Its None of your Concern, Step aside". I folded my hand into a Fist and trys to uppercut him. But he swings the belt which wipes me clear on the back. He grabs me by the arm and swings me into the room and into a wall. " Dont you EVER swing a fist at me"!!! he walks outta the room and slams the door as i crawl toward Jaden. " Are you ok?" i ask him. " the question is......are...you ok?" we smirk at eachother and laugh. though we werent really happy, we still felt hate against what the People do here.

" I Promise you, we will Escape from this place"
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:51 am


i love it so far. very nice job shy.

0_Midnight_Silence_0


King Shygon Darsania
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:14 am


L0RD_DARK_LINK
i love it so far. very nice job shy.

thanx, its the Sleep deprivation that helped me @-@ didnt sleep at all...
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:07 pm


kirby approves this
(>'.'> "nice"

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polka913

PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:05 pm


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vary well dun 3nodding 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:05 pm


Its great but try not to make too many spelling n grammar mistakes. other than that keep it up smile

Sin Greed95


King Shygon Darsania
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 10:58 pm


Dark_Link_Hylian15
Its great but try not to make too many spelling n grammar mistakes. other than that keep it up smile

Read 2nd comment, Aka my first comment. I didn't sleep AT ALL the the morning I posted this XD.
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