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Mooon and Elf WiP

Delilaer

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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:01 pm

M'kay, could I get some redlines on this rough sketch? heart

MOOOON

Oh oh, and if you would, could do a redline for this other old thing I did?

ELF.

His ears are bugging me, and his head... it just doesn't look right. xc

Thank you!

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:17 pm

-: Are they both pictures of you? I'm terrible at photography. @@' :-

Shoroie

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Delilaer

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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:57 am

Oohhh... shoot! I don't know what that is, I must of actually copied and pasted a different picture, that's not even me. I don't ever know who that is. >.> They're fixed now though! He he.

Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:50 am

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Delilaer

Just a few things I noticed here:

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The mouth and chin are slightly off-center to the left, and the right side of the mouth is noticeably wider than the left side.

Also, I think his cheekbones could stand to be a bit higher on his face.

esQueue

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Yasushiroi

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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:13 pm

Here ya' go.
I hope I'm doing this right... *just joined* sweatdrop

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