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 Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:38 am
:/
fr srs you guise
(not SARS btw)
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:53 am
"Cause I really always knew that my little crime would be cold,
that's why I got a heater for your thighs." I agree. 
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Questionable Investigator
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:32 am
Lol honestly I think she was just writing how she usually does. Like you can tell she TRIED to make it logical... she's just too retarded to see it isn't logical. o_o Like she actually spelled "Azkaban" right... I think... didn't she?
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:22 am
Lol, i thought it was alright.
Nothing much happened though.
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:32 am
Yeah I think she did a little too
Not much hilarious happened :/
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:38 am
I think it was the Golden Shower that made me think that.
and the fact that the baby talks lolwtf was she thinking.
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:02 pm
I loved chapter nine >:l
You guys are seriously to critical on something that ISN'T very good xD
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:50 pm
I thought Ch.9 was a quote goldmine.
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:56 pm
 I agree.
I could hardly read it.
Like, even with the first eight chapters having all their obvious grammatical problems, I could still read them.
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Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:21 pm
I did like chapter nun but the rest of the chapters were better, in my opinion...
I blame that b*****d Zaden, he's been spell checking for her
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