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into darkness (poem)

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air35

PostPosted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:29 pm


Into darkness
By: air35

As I lay full of despair
My wings of love bleeds the blood of guilt
As time slowly flys past me
The crimson blood painfully turns love into self-hatred
The once white wings are now black as death
The once supportive ground cracks
There’s noting to hang on to
There’s noting to hold on to
I fall down
I try looking for a escape
But I see nothing but darkness
Painfully memories fill my mind
I know I won’t be saved
No.
I know I can’t be saved
I give up
I shed tears of sadness
As I fall deeper into darkness
PostPosted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 3:27 pm


HOLY BA-CHEESE CRACKERS! I LUV IT! youre poem proclaimed the feeling, and i felt it. nice job!

Maiyx-chan

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