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Your acceptance has been put on HOLD for the following reasons:

Oof, you're making me feel guilty.
Detail is better, but there are a few things.

The roleplay section is a tad bit short... We would require a longer one for the guild. If I may offer my advice, I would suggest making one that interacts with her family. There,we see how she is when in a situation she is comfortable in, and see her family in a greater light.