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 Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 12:03 pm
Ok so here is my poem let me know what you think....
I miss him so much
It's not fair
Does he even care
My heart feels like paper
Every time I think about him it RIPS apart
Many more times and my paper heart will be ripped to shreds
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Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 5:49 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:17 pm
You know there's a section where you can put your poetry and art stuff...You should've posted it there.
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Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:33 pm
its good 3nodding
id like to se more from u
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:31 pm
thanks
i didnt know if it was going to be that good. i will post more
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:34 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:57 pm
Wrong ******** forum.
Moved.
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Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:07 pm
Sorry, as much as I hate saying this...
It was over used cliche stereotypical emo shitty poetry.
Nothing against you, just the poem in general.
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