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lilmissmaya

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:48 pm


these were done in ballpoint, so no erasing was done. (I'm weird like that.)
just lemme know what you guys think, what needs to be tweaked.
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thank you!
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 1:49 pm


-: I'm jealous of your attention to details. Really good job! I tend to sketch in ink, too.

I'm so sorry! I know this place gets to be a little quiet but I'm usually around here. I, also, want to apologize for the sketchy lines. My computer is broken, currently and my mother's computer is odd, especially the mouse. (Also for the lack of details, here. My time is running out.) ^^

The first thing that I noticed that they had small head. At first, I couldn't tell why but I think it maybe the chins. By just curving the chins, you made them look round or small. Especially, one the bottom one. At first, I thought it might be the cheek bones but the chin kind of sinks in a little bit.

My suggestion would be working on the chins a bit more. I hope to see more pictures from you. These are very good.

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These are suggestions and you don't have to follow them. Feel free to ask any questions! :-

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lilmissmaya

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:04 am


thank you for replying! I was noticing it was a little quiet, but then again, most guilds I join are usually on the verge of death XD
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:29 pm


-: This use to be more active but that was probably, when the Work In Progress Forum was in the dark corner of the Picture Forum.

The Work In Progress forum use to take days for someone to reply to anything, if you were lucky. The longest time I had to wait was a month. ^^

Anyway, welcome to guild! I hope you have fun while you're here! :-

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