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ber-the-conqueror

PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:00 pm


Yesh, I am a writer...

(Still needs a title, but I'm also trying to get this in Japanese, which is my explanation for parts that don't exactly flow....)

Second to minute
Minute to hour
Hour to day
Day to week
Week to month
I miss you

Oh, my graceful hawk
I await alone
Counting on your return

Your departure was difficult
Watching your flight
into the brilliant blue sky

I was blind not to see
that I was smothering you
out of my own selfish ways

As young and naive I was
I still await your return home

Oh, my pure dove
where are you?
It's been years
since the angel of darkness has taken you in the night

WIll the nightengale ever forgive
my ignorance?
Was I arrogant
to not listen for your heavenly song?

Will the mockingbird
sing after it loses the passion to sing?

I am to blame
for your lack of inspiration (muse)
Please forgive me
for not shining as bright as I possibly could

Over the years
I have grown *matured*
Through my aged eyes
I have been enlightened

I have grown aware
of the mistakes I made those many years ago.

Oh, angel
I have grown to miss you as well
My lack of understanding
has kept you away from me

But I have changed
I swear by Tsukiyomi (the goddess of the moon)

Seconds to minutes
Minutes to hours
Hours to days
Day to night
Dusk to dawn
I await

From the gentle red dawn
the angel of darkness emerges in the talons of my beloved hawk.

"Thank you for my wish,"
I thank the shooting star

And that's when I see
The phoenix crying as he passes over the red sky

Seeing the hawk
I reminisce in old memories
Joyful of its return
yet mournful of the angel's death

Once more, the hawk departs
only to return home with a snake in talons
I cry in happiness
for I have been freed of the snake's curse

I look to my hands
and find the pure white skin shed from the snake

Now I know in my heart
that the mockingbird will sing once more
And the dove will always live in my soul
And the phoenix will always fly forevermore

Second to minute
Minute to hour
Hour to day
Day to week
Week to month
Month to year
Oh, how I've missed you

As I lay watching the clouds pass
I make one last wish
Shine on, dear hawk,
for I have achieved eternal happiness.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:08 pm


Okay, so this one was inspired by Sasuke's "bonds" in which he held (if not, he currently holds) with others. It's not complete, but I'm posting what I have for now. Also, this is told from Naruto/person with said relation's point of view.

"Worthless"
What am I to you?
You said we were "like brothers",
and all you do is meditate
upon the hatred born from the emptiness in your heart

We've always stuck together
we shed blood together
Along side each other in battle

Now, you treat me like another stranger
Worthless of your time
---
I watched you from a distance
Your brilliance grew
but was quickly extinguished
The moment you decided to leave

I used to believe in fairy tales
Only to learn that they never become "reality"
And in the present
I sit alone in disbelief
of myown dreams
---

ber-the-conqueror

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