My Greek Myth

[raeflower]

Alright. Anyone who expressed an interest in my myth, here's how it's going to work. I'm going to post a section of my myth separately as much as i can. I will have the number at the top of the page. Please leave a comment, telling me what i could do better. heres the link. http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101528307#title !thank you!  

[NekoMimi916]

First comment!!!! whee
Wowzas! Great job! (I suck at Prolouges.....) Love your writing style and idea!!! heart heart heart