This is her story. The one you guys probably know. She made a few changes to the story in a last minute edit. If you get ahold of her 5 copies of the book you'd understand.
This is Ai's notes.
Ameena Cumen will be revised to Estelise Cumen. I decided to use this name since is represents the moon. Ameena is the priestess of the moon, but this fits perfectly in the Cumen family tree.
The scene on how Ameena died. Also her biography.
Estelise Cumen, the daughter of Hendrick Cumen and Sonia Elfrita. She has one elder brother, Kyo Cumen. Being a noble, of high class royalty, she adored her older brother, he was the one who taught her swordsman ship, venture into the world. He was everything to her. However the great war took place. She begged her brother not to leave, but he told her he must lead his men to protect her and this kingdom. She waited for his return, however. Kyo Cumen was killed in the battlefield and she was saddened by his loss. However her brother who was Kyo reawaken as Hokyo, the sleeping soul that took over her brother's form.
She was the last of the Cumen bloodline, and the empress to the throne. Her brown hair, tied up like a rosemary bun, her bangs were curled as if she was a innocent princess. Wearing her favorite blue cased light dress, with mixture of white puffed shoulder pads. She glances outi nto the window, sadly looking into the world. Then that happened... " Lady Estelise! You must escape from the castle! Damon's army approaches! One of the generals looks like your fallen brother Kyo Milady " She gasped, her brother is alive? And he was sent to assasinate her? But why? She questioned herself, as the royal guards attempts to flee her to safety, all safety routes were blocked by magic. Then the door was blowned down. The Princess of the heir to the throne was defended by her royal knights,
" It can't be... no it can't be true! Brother! " She cried out, Hokyo responded but gritted his teeth. When he was Kyo, he watched through his reincarnation's eyes. Estelise was so fragile, she has a short life, so the mages said. Hokyo hoped for Estelise to lead her people to salvation but why did Damon sent him to this castle to where she was kept it? "... I'm sorry. But you life ends here. " The princess was shocked, with tears she cried. Her knights went into actions, however they died by Hokyo's swift swordsmanship. Now it was him versus Kyo's little sister. Estelise sobbed but watches his determination to kill her. She was feuled by rages, she stood, picked up one of the Shields from the walls and the Sword. Same like what Hokyo carries. The twins swords of Sun and Moon. Lunar Sword whom she wields, as she acts like a knight, ready to fight Hokyo. She accepted the fact she must fight to survive.
" Estelise... you have grown so beautiful. Child of the Moon. I... " Before he can speak, her royal brooch, glows into a light pink shine. As a proof the princess has accepted her fate to perish someday and connected with the world. The light engulfed the entire castle, as everything went blank.
The Death of Estelise.
Hokyo, Yune and Bandi asked Estelise to remain at the castle as they head out to fix the world's problems. Soma who recently gained his possesion his son Kaine to his side. He brought upon the war, God versus the humans. Estelise watches the man brought Chaos to the world. The Skies were shattered, revealing space and stars. Purple meteors shot down to the world, destroying the lands of Esperia. Estelise ran to the balcony and watches as Hokyo's group was unable to defeat Soma. She had her hands to her face, with tears. She is so useless. Kira and Yune... her best friends are going to die by that god. " Kyo... I love you. "The spiral of light encircles her being. She had her hands in a praying position. She had tears streaming from her eyes, she begin to preform the Child of the Moon incantation. This caused Hokyo to be shocked in horror, he turned from the sight of battle and saw the castle whom his sister was in. He quickly left the field, and attempts to run back to the castle to stop his sister from preforming that ritual.
She glowed emest of white feathery light around her. Her wings of a Seraphim opened out from her back. The castle itself reacted to it, causing a giant spiritual Valkyrie Knight to be shown. As it wields its bow and arrow, it aims for Shindi's heart. Estelise lady like appearance was shown as a Valkyrie armor. Her long flowing blue hair reached her back. Hokyo desperately tried to call out to her. This happened before, Yuveria was the former Child of the moon and used this very same ritual to save her nations and Hokyo, granting Hokyo everlasting life. Hokyo screamed out to her name, as Estelise body was sacrificed, into the arrow, the spirit shot the arrow as it skies rocket across the lands, oceans and towards Shindi. The Godly being was strucken, as he cries out in pain Before he was return to being a core. Soma retreated, and taunted Yunari about he manipulated Kaine's thoughts that he is the father of him. Whom she went into a depression state.
Hokyo found his sister who laid on the ground, she opened her eyes to see Hokyo. He held her in his arms as he shook her form. " Kyo... I'm glad your back. I am so happy to see you again and well. " Hokyo realized he is Kyo also. Kyo may be a fragment of his memories but she is His Sister also. He cried, not wanting to lose her. Her gentle barren hands touches his cheeks, she smiles as her heart begin to slowly die. " To live is the essence of this world. A never ending dream drives the world to salvation. Promise me, you'll protect this world and Yune with all your heart. Thank you " As Hokyo's crew arrives, they were sadened by the sight. Estelise Cumen, the last of the Cumen bloodline to die. She Sacrificed herself for the people of this world. Her love for her people, and her friends turned the tides of the table. Estelise we will never forget your courageous act. You truly are our queen.
A surprise.
The ceremony of the Queen of Esperia who died in protecting her friends and her people. Yune found Kaine who was reduced to be a 12 year old. She smiles, her brothers, merged and became 12 year old all over again. In his arms, he had a baby boy. He went to Hokyo, and lend him the child. He was shocked. Estelise had a baby boy. But who was the father? Adam. He smirked, and with that, he raised the child as one of his own.
Notes. I know it's a little cliche to the point, but I am truly fond of my imagination to exceed this far. Adam, my brother's other closest friend, I decided him to be Estelise's husband and lover. He fits perfectly. The son who is the true heir to the throne I decided to let Hokyo name him and put together a story for it. I'm done here, this is the summary I came up with for the ending. Goodnight.
This is Ai's notes.
Ameena Cumen will be revised to Estelise Cumen. I decided to use this name since is represents the moon. Ameena is the priestess of the moon, but this fits perfectly in the Cumen family tree.
The scene on how Ameena died. Also her biography.
Estelise Cumen, the daughter of Hendrick Cumen and Sonia Elfrita. She has one elder brother, Kyo Cumen. Being a noble, of high class royalty, she adored her older brother, he was the one who taught her swordsman ship, venture into the world. He was everything to her. However the great war took place. She begged her brother not to leave, but he told her he must lead his men to protect her and this kingdom. She waited for his return, however. Kyo Cumen was killed in the battlefield and she was saddened by his loss. However her brother who was Kyo reawaken as Hokyo, the sleeping soul that took over her brother's form.
She was the last of the Cumen bloodline, and the empress to the throne. Her brown hair, tied up like a rosemary bun, her bangs were curled as if she was a innocent princess. Wearing her favorite blue cased light dress, with mixture of white puffed shoulder pads. She glances outi nto the window, sadly looking into the world. Then that happened... " Lady Estelise! You must escape from the castle! Damon's army approaches! One of the generals looks like your fallen brother Kyo Milady " She gasped, her brother is alive? And he was sent to assasinate her? But why? She questioned herself, as the royal guards attempts to flee her to safety, all safety routes were blocked by magic. Then the door was blowned down. The Princess of the heir to the throne was defended by her royal knights,
" It can't be... no it can't be true! Brother! " She cried out, Hokyo responded but gritted his teeth. When he was Kyo, he watched through his reincarnation's eyes. Estelise was so fragile, she has a short life, so the mages said. Hokyo hoped for Estelise to lead her people to salvation but why did Damon sent him to this castle to where she was kept it? "... I'm sorry. But you life ends here. " The princess was shocked, with tears she cried. Her knights went into actions, however they died by Hokyo's swift swordsmanship. Now it was him versus Kyo's little sister. Estelise sobbed but watches his determination to kill her. She was feuled by rages, she stood, picked up one of the Shields from the walls and the Sword. Same like what Hokyo carries. The twins swords of Sun and Moon. Lunar Sword whom she wields, as she acts like a knight, ready to fight Hokyo. She accepted the fact she must fight to survive.
" Estelise... you have grown so beautiful. Child of the Moon. I... " Before he can speak, her royal brooch, glows into a light pink shine. As a proof the princess has accepted her fate to perish someday and connected with the world. The light engulfed the entire castle, as everything went blank.
The Death of Estelise.
Hokyo, Yune and Bandi asked Estelise to remain at the castle as they head out to fix the world's problems. Soma who recently gained his possesion his son Kaine to his side. He brought upon the war, God versus the humans. Estelise watches the man brought Chaos to the world. The Skies were shattered, revealing space and stars. Purple meteors shot down to the world, destroying the lands of Esperia. Estelise ran to the balcony and watches as Hokyo's group was unable to defeat Soma. She had her hands to her face, with tears. She is so useless. Kira and Yune... her best friends are going to die by that god. " Kyo... I love you. "The spiral of light encircles her being. She had her hands in a praying position. She had tears streaming from her eyes, she begin to preform the Child of the Moon incantation. This caused Hokyo to be shocked in horror, he turned from the sight of battle and saw the castle whom his sister was in. He quickly left the field, and attempts to run back to the castle to stop his sister from preforming that ritual.
She glowed emest of white feathery light around her. Her wings of a Seraphim opened out from her back. The castle itself reacted to it, causing a giant spiritual Valkyrie Knight to be shown. As it wields its bow and arrow, it aims for Shindi's heart. Estelise lady like appearance was shown as a Valkyrie armor. Her long flowing blue hair reached her back. Hokyo desperately tried to call out to her. This happened before, Yuveria was the former Child of the moon and used this very same ritual to save her nations and Hokyo, granting Hokyo everlasting life. Hokyo screamed out to her name, as Estelise body was sacrificed, into the arrow, the spirit shot the arrow as it skies rocket across the lands, oceans and towards Shindi. The Godly being was strucken, as he cries out in pain Before he was return to being a core. Soma retreated, and taunted Yunari about he manipulated Kaine's thoughts that he is the father of him. Whom she went into a depression state.
Hokyo found his sister who laid on the ground, she opened her eyes to see Hokyo. He held her in his arms as he shook her form. " Kyo... I'm glad your back. I am so happy to see you again and well. " Hokyo realized he is Kyo also. Kyo may be a fragment of his memories but she is His Sister also. He cried, not wanting to lose her. Her gentle barren hands touches his cheeks, she smiles as her heart begin to slowly die. " To live is the essence of this world. A never ending dream drives the world to salvation. Promise me, you'll protect this world and Yune with all your heart. Thank you " As Hokyo's crew arrives, they were sadened by the sight. Estelise Cumen, the last of the Cumen bloodline to die. She Sacrificed herself for the people of this world. Her love for her people, and her friends turned the tides of the table. Estelise we will never forget your courageous act. You truly are our queen.
A surprise.
The ceremony of the Queen of Esperia who died in protecting her friends and her people. Yune found Kaine who was reduced to be a 12 year old. She smiles, her brothers, merged and became 12 year old all over again. In his arms, he had a baby boy. He went to Hokyo, and lend him the child. He was shocked. Estelise had a baby boy. But who was the father? Adam. He smirked, and with that, he raised the child as one of his own.
Notes. I know it's a little cliche to the point, but I am truly fond of my imagination to exceed this far. Adam, my brother's other closest friend, I decided him to be Estelise's husband and lover. He fits perfectly. The son who is the true heir to the throne I decided to let Hokyo name him and put together a story for it. I'm done here, this is the summary I came up with for the ending. Goodnight.
